Topic: Too much, ordinary or sappy profile? | |
---|---|
Give it to me straight ladies. Don't hold back even though I wear my heart on my sleeve. Last date I had was, ummm. Can't remember.
|
|
|
|
PLEASE RATE ME
|
|
|
|
Edited by
Mortman
on
Thu 05/16/13 09:33 PM
|
|
Hi pasterony,
It's a pretty good profile. Several good, sharp photos and easy to read text. I only have a few suggestions. I like that your photos all show your face clearly. You're not very well-dressed in any of them. You could have shaved for the photo. One of them, maybe. Then again, some women like facial hair. For the text, you could probably leave out some of the sad stuff and add more positive stuff. For example, I'd leave off the whole "momma's boy" thing. Maybe you could just read through it and try to put on your best impression of yourself. I mean, I know you want to be honest, but we all love our mothers, and you could let the woman you meet decide how bad you are. You might also want to add something about what you might like to do, like describe the evening out or the weekend date you might take the woman on. Just an idea. Otherwise, good job. I'd rate it a 6/10. Good luck! |
|
|