Topic: the old man
jimz's photo
Thu 08/16/07 06:38 PM
they fear the cough
of the old man
his grey hair splintering
thought out
they know he doesn't give a sh*t
and the wine he drinks
can't get wisdom drunk
he walks like he's ill
because time
did not escape his bones
and though his eyes have grown clouds
he can see through them in visions
the ships of other men
have drowned in weaker storms
but this old man
became invisible inside his boat
so he could wander through
and in himself
it was now
an endless world

matt83760's photo
Thu 08/16/07 06:54 PM
how do old people flip the newspaper so easy does it come with age?

why do they call a bettery a battry?

hugasoldier's photo
Thu 08/16/07 07:05 PM
nicely put.

pkh's photo
Thu 08/16/07 07:22 PM
flowerforyou Very nice