Topic: hello world
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Thu 03/21/13 04:23 PM
In marbled halls I sought my way,bearded bright ones seemed to hold sway,with they're books and they're learning and they're hair long going grey,demanding the wisdom, that they're lives had displayed,when bade by the bright light, whome would they choose, to go to earth,certain to lose,with all the attributes of seeing and sight,clairvoyance, omnipotence,gifted with healing light,to an eternity of an earth wondering soul,no matter how hard he tried, would never attain they're goals, lives outcast, memorries past, to try too hard,brings loss and failure,while life in recompose brings ridicule and danger,the harder we try, the harder we fail, to live life with fun light and laughter, our holy grail. X

DaySinner's photo
Thu 03/21/13 05:03 PM
rings true :thumbsup:

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Fri 03/22/13 12:08 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Fri 03/22/13 12:09 AM
"to live life with fun light and laughter, our holy grail."
I couldn't agree more... enjoyed your write... laugh laugh
let the good times rofl roll rofl

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Fri 03/22/13 12:43 AM

"to live life with fun light and laughter, our holy grail."
I couldn't agree more... enjoyed your write... laugh laugh
let the good times rofl roll rofl


Gotta agree with Athena here . . . nice poem

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Fri 03/22/13 01:52 AM
I'm with Athena and Mig on this...