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im leaving now to slay the foe
fight my battles high and low im leaving mother hear me go please wish me luck today ive grown my wings i wish to fly seize my victories where they lie im going mom but please dont cry let me speak my say i want to see and touch and hear though there are dangers there are fears ill smile my smiles and dry my tears please let me find my way im off to find my world my dreams carve my niche sew my seams just remember as i sail my streams ill love you all the way |
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very nice
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nice work, good feeling in it
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very nice love ur writing
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u are the next best poet
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Nice did you write this?
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Slim there is a post here you need to read on copy right laws if you are not the author or the poet of a poem please give credit to the one it is due too
http://www.sstx.org/experiment.php?page=newsCounselorsCorner here is my proof |
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this poem is not mine. i got it out of a chicken soup book. i thought that it would be ok to copy it cuz i didnt think that it was copyrighted.
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Thank you for your honesty but in here if they are not your own words just be kind enough to give the credit to were you did get it from due to the ones in here actually write the poems they post unless they note that they did not and give the credit to the Poet or at least were it came from.
Thank you for being honest |
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