Topic: Ashes in time
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Tue 10/17/06 11:13 PM
somewhere between time and a memory
there are shades of light and moments of fright
that remains to be seen
your dreams are a palace with iron gates..
and your motives are meaningless when you can't even say
that i can see beyond the shadows of a dream

someone must fall when the support of the wall becomes
too brittle and weak/all the weight of the world and the shoulders its
hurled/justified as righteously


I belong to the night its the only place for me
I can't fill such a void in this world /I say in all honesty
for ashes in time is what they'll make of me


Reliving each day leaves much to be discovered
on the bed where you lay/tears upon yesterdays covers
don't you go crying now/it's always the same
your condition weakening


i belong to the night/its the only place for me
i cant fill such a void in this world/i say in all honesty
cause ashes in time is all they will think of me

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Tue 10/17/06 11:15 PM
maybe

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 10/18/06 06:28 AM
Frightneed of what the future may hold
Let go and dream with me
I can light up the corners of your darkness
chase away your shadows
A strong foundation is what you need to build upon
The nourishment of my love to strengthen your soul
Ashes from fire, let the timbers burn
Don't turn away from the flame tht burns
The dew falls in the night
but
the time for crying is done
A new day has begun
let go,
let go,
let go,
come....
and run with me

Jimi366's photo
Wed 10/18/06 10:30 AM
The way you two write poems to each other is beautiful.
I see a match being made!

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Wed 10/18/06 10:37 AM
By your hand i was lead to place that only a dream could take me/through
your eyes i felt the love that in time had once forsaked me/I know i'm
safe now,so release the heavens rain/for I bathe myself in your glory/my
hands are clean again/
all old lovers are now forgotten/just as I've been washed away/no
shadows of deception and lonliness...shall crumble this soul today/and
words can't describe the dawn/when your image is etched in my mind/oh
the rapture of someday knowing you/and the glory we're bound to find
(you're in my heart'wanda)

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/18/06 12:01 PM
Being made Jim think its already there, for at least the two minds &
souls have gotten there.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 10/18/06 12:22 PM
The gates of hell have slammed shut
welded together, never to fall into that
endless pit again
Though the door is closed
the flame still burns, but for a different cause
the fire now is all consuming
just as my every thought is of you.
What I see now is your soul
laid bare for only me to see
and what a wonderful thing
to be so good
and kind
and true
No lies
No rejection
No shame
just you and I here now in our United Dream...


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Wed 10/18/06 03:25 PM
I rather enjoy watching the dance of words and souls going on here,it
gives one hope.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/18/06 05:27 PM
ohhh Poet ya said that right and gawd we need hope and dreams