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Topic: Untangled
tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Sat 02/16/13 07:26 PM Edited by tayah12 on Sat 02/16/13 07:38 PM
As I awaken I am listening The only heart beat I'm hearing is my own it's broken rhythmic beating Overwhelms me I'm alone We're untangled Is this happening Did we untangle our souls In the darkness I can't see you Was last night the final straw Its my pride She won't let me Admit I love you too Three words meek My actions speak What my tongue has yet to say It's a nightmare I'm sure you're there I'll awaken Tangled up with you

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Sun 02/17/13 01:19 AM
lovely that was tayah just lovely

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sun 02/17/13 01:43 AM Edited by AthenaRose2 on Sun 02/17/13 01:43 AM
This reminds me of our friendships here on Mingle, and how much I enjoy the tangled webs we all weave together... makes us feel so connected... enjoyed this write, Tayah...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Sun 02/17/13 08:40 AM
Loved it! I moment of doubt can sometimes move us into action.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 02/17/13 11:23 AM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 02/17/13 07:26 PM
Excellent write.....

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Sun 02/17/13 07:47 PM
Thanks for reading. Inspired by one of my favorite songs.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 02/17/13 07:51 PM
Thanks for reading. Inspired by one of my favorite songs. What's the name of the song?

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Mon 02/18/13 01:07 AM
Thanks for reading. Inspired by one of my favorite songs. What's the name of the song? Skyscraper by Demi lavato lol yuppies I'm a girly girl

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1539	Tue 02/19/13 11:44 PM
As I awaken I am listening The only heart beat I'm hearing is my own it's broken rhythmic beating Overwhelms me I'm alone We're untangled Is this happening Did we untangle our souls In the darkness I can't see you Was last night the final straw Its my pride She won't let me Admit I love you too Three words meek My actions speak What my tongue has yet to say It's a nightmare I'm sure you're there I'll awaken Tangled up with you tayah . . . damn girl you can write. Loved this!!!

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Wed 02/20/13 07:57 AM Edited by tayah12 on Wed 02/20/13 08:00 AM
As I awaken I am listening The only heart beat I'm hearing is my own it's broken rhythmic beating Overwhelms me I'm alone We're untangled Is this happening Did we untangle our souls In the darkness I can't see you Was last night the final straw Its my pride She won't let me Admit I love you too Three words meek My actions speak What my tongue has yet to say It's a nightmare I'm sure you're there I'll awaken Tangled up with you tayah . . . damn girl you can write. Loved this!!! Thank you. That means so much come from you mig.. you're an amazing writer!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 02/23/13 05:30 AM
Those first few moments before becoming fully conscious often speak volumes, create that butterfly feeling....This is a favorite Tay...x

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