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Topic: I miss my best friend...
AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 02/06/13 05:13 PM
I can’t get you out of my head these damn awful mood swings are going to be the death of me yet just when I think I’m done with you I recall every single thing you do and today was such a busy day long and difficult in its own way but my mind wouldn’t concentrate and I made more than one mistake I wish I could pull myself together when will I get over you, never? I don’t want to think about us when I do, it hurts too damn much but there really is no us anymore and you I’ve got to stop wishing for I must be retarded or a tad bit insane cuz you’ve taken up residence inside my brain oh well, I guess I’ll have to keep venting then turn my a$$ back around by repenting and I’ll try to block out how stupid I look but who really cares cuz they’ve all read my book with you in every chapter I’m not hard to define and one of these days I will draw the line yeah, I know, until the next mood swing swings me again then I’ll miss you, and want to see you, my very best friend © Athena Rose 02/07/13

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bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 02/06/13 06:05 PM
my bestie passed away jan. 7 this year, i will never stop missing her :( i know this is a different miss, but it's hard all the same. well done, athenaR

Zimzane2 Joined Mon 01/14/13 Posts: 221	Wed 02/06/13 07:04 PM


AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 02/07/13 01:03 AM
my bestie passed away jan. 7 this year, i will never stop missing her :( i know this is a different miss, but it's hard all the same. well done, athenaR bastet.. I'm so sorry for your loss... the constant missing ache... the lost connection... the laughter and shared secrets now eternally quiet... the song a reminder... the face in the crowd... the memories so lasting and ever present... springs forth the deepest sorrow...

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 02/07/13 01:03 AM
zim...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 02/07/13 08:18 AM
Very nice! I remembered mine too with this write... the fella that gave me this name Ted-itis. He said, "Ted, you're a strange kid... but you grow on me like a disease, an inflamation... from now on, I'll call you Ted-itis." I miss him all the time.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 02/07/13 08:45 AM
Very nice! I remembered mine too with this write... the fella that gave me this name Ted-itis. He said, "Ted, you're a strange kid... but you grow on me like a disease, an inflamation... from now on, I'll call you Ted-itis." I miss him all the time. well, T... now I know to call you Ted... sadness for your loss...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 02/07/13 09:54 AM
Ted it is... follow the trend, haha. Nice write AR! Well done.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 02/07/13 11:25 AM
Ted it is... follow the trend, haha. Nice write AR! Well done.

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Thu 02/07/13 12:05 PM
I love to read your writings Always with feeling and emotion It makes me FEEL ! Good stuff ! KiK

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 02/07/13 03:10 PM
I love to read your writings Always with feeling and emotion It makes me FEEL ! Good stuff ! KiK thank you muchly, my friend... shared feelings is keeping it real...

Solace84 Joined Mon 04/30/12 Posts: 322	Thu 02/07/13 04:07 PM
You can't really help missing your loved ones,ms Athen. Just put your brain together and go on.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 02/07/13 04:26 PM
You can't really help missing your loved ones,ms Athen. Just put your brain together and go on. thank you, Solace... I know you are right... and I will...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 02/07/13 09:20 PM
been down this road, sadly, more than once.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Fri 02/08/13 01:22 AM
been down this road, sadly, more than once.