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Topic: Heartstrings
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/06/13 06:11 AM
Heartstrings What if your heart pulls you To a land you don’t want to be Those strings that tie and bind you Never letting you be free Can you ever Live and let die Or will your heart shut down Will you even try What if your heart pulls you Into a forbidden place Where all you ever see Is their gorgeous face

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 02/06/13 06:32 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Wed 02/06/13 06:45 AM
I feel a need to hug you (((Hippy)))

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/06/13 06:51 AM
Thanks guys and gals!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 02/06/13 06:58 AM
lovely.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 02/06/13 07:30 AM
Heartstrings What if your heart pulls you To a land you don’t want to be Those strings that tie and bind you Never letting you be free Can you ever Live and let die Or will your heart shut down Will you even try What if your heart pulls you Into a forbidden place Where all you ever see Is their gorgeous face I really like the connection in this... can definitely feel the strings...

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/06/13 10:46 AM
Thanks ladies!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 02/06/13 06:09 PM
i enjoyed that hippie, write on! :)

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 02/06/13 07:17 PM


Zimzane2 Joined Mon 01/14/13 Posts: 221	Wed 02/06/13 07:18 PM
Liked very much.

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Wed 02/06/13 10:06 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful write. When I read the words I could hear it as a song in my head.

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Thu 02/07/13 02:51 AM
Thanks everybody!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 02/19/13 01:55 PM
very smexy and romantic!!!

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Tue 02/19/13 03:26 PM
Heartstrings What if your heart pulls you To a land you don’t want to be Those strings that tie and bind you Never letting you be free Can you ever Live and let die Or will your heart shut down Will you even try What if your heart pulls you Into a forbidden place Where all you ever see Is their gorgeous face That was fabulous... I missed it somehow. Very impressive! I've tried many ways... lived and let die; shut down. Tried and didn't get to where I wanted to be. Here in this forbidden place... and her face wasn't her own anyway, unimportant. her heart seemed worth the persuit... and I don't regret.

navygirl Joined Sat 06/02/07 Posts: 8118	Tue 02/19/13 03:33 PM
Nice Oldhippie. This part is me and nope I won't try. Or will your heart shut down Will you even try

Givemyheart2U Joined Sun 05/25/08 Posts: 56	Wed 02/20/13 01:50 PM
I absolutely loved this poem Hippie it pulled at my heart strings

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/20/13 04:18 PM
Thank you everybody. I still like my first poem "Linger" the best.

mani76 Joined Tue 11/27/12 Posts: 20	Thu 02/21/13 04:26 PM
hm lovely

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Thu 02/21/13 04:33 PM
Heartstrings What if your heart pulls you To a land you don’t want to be Those strings that tie and bind you Never letting you be free Can you ever Live and let die Or will your heart shut down Will you even try What if your heart pulls you Into a forbidden place Where all you ever see Is their gorgeous face You are writing poetry again! Very nice!