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It's morning and the sun is out.
The petals are open, fleshy and soft. They are arranged in symmetry, Splashy, a pinwheel of red. A wasp nears toward the black center, An invitation. He lands, wings spread. There is a mingling, an exchange. The stem acknowledges the weight. Soon the wasp retreats, head first Leaving the flower intact. The meeting necessary, symbiotic. |
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Very nice, subtle, Is the meeting between a man and a woman only a necessary act?
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Thanks Mike, I wondered if anyone would comment on the sexual undertones. And of course, the meeting between a man and woman isn't just a necessary one...if it's with the right person it is utterly amazing.
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very nice
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Thanks for clearing that up......I was thinking maybe relationships might be a thing of the past
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nice presentations of wording, short and meaningful
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Thanks for the comments. Sometimes short and to the point is what's needed. That way in relationships we don't waste each others time. :)
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