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Topic: Rambles...
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Thu 12/20/12 07:16 PM
I walked away from all that seemed good
yet looking back there was only misery
staring in my face screaming
delusion

Crying never became a part of that life
no tears shed, nor remorse or regrets
only gratitude for avoiding
intrusion

Promises made and broken as future laid
plans dispersed in the atmosphere
where time and space were pure
illusion

Soul searching and heart filtering
uncovered the reality of who was
laying sheltered yet hidden beneath
confusion

Wisdom gained from backward glances
propel you forward where the New
beckons with doors wide open finally a
conclusion

Blind faith rose and carried back home
the one who mattered most
in this catacomb of life
ME...

© Ainjel 2012














DaySinner's photo
Thu 12/20/12 07:34 PM
i love this structure. I'm hearing music. A woman with deadpan eyes is singing it with special emphasis on each ending.
I especially like this last part

Blind faith rose and carried back home
the one who mattered most
in this catacomb of life
ME...

There is only one person you can truly count on. It's the dirty truth.

italianman4u's photo
Thu 12/20/12 08:57 PM
I smell cheese

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Thu 12/20/12 09:02 PM
Nice write....smokin

pennyg281's photo
Thu 12/20/12 11:15 PM
flowerforyou nice write

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Fri 12/21/12 03:33 AM
:heart: Again, Ainjel, another that allows me to look deeper to see… how unfair life can be when we lean one way and get pushed in another… but ultimately, discovering the truth and being good to ourselves is what keeps us moving forward… flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Fri 12/21/12 03:51 AM

I walked away from all that seemed good
yet looking back there was only misery
staring in my face screaming
delusion

Crying never became a part of that life
no tears shed, nor remorse or regrets
only gratitude for avoiding
intrusion

Promises made and broken as future laid
plans dispersed in the atmosphere
where time and space were pure
illusion

Soul searching and heart filtering
uncovered the reality of who was
laying sheltered yet hidden beneath
confusion

Wisdom gained from backward glances
propel you forward where the New
beckons with doors wide open finally a
conclusion

Blind faith rose and carried back home
the one who mattered most
in this catacomb of life
ME...

© Ainjel 2012

I love this! Really really love this!














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Fri 12/21/12 04:46 AM
flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers

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Fri 12/21/12 05:07 AM
Edited by Ainjel on Fri 12/21/12 05:21 AM
Thankyou DaySinner, and yes at the dirty truth that you are the only one you can count on..♥

Thankyou Up2..Happy Holidays..♥

Thankyou Penny..Happy Holidays..♥

Thankyou Athena, life can be complicated if you let it, as can love but truth and moving forward is always the best outcome in life..♥

Thankyou Mig, you inspire me always..♥

Thankyou Tazztops..♥ & flowers




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Fri 12/21/12 05:25 AM
Ainj, so happy that you have traveled your path and come out whole...Reaching closure is actually reaching openings :heart: ...To a tranquil New Year drinker


kc0003's photo
Fri 12/21/12 09:15 AM
well, I didn't have to wait very long...bigsmile


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Fri 12/21/12 10:52 PM

Ainj, so happy that you have traveled your path and come out whole...Reaching closure is actually reaching openings :heart: ...To a tranquil New Year drinker




Thankyou..♥..Has been the best journey ever...All the best for the New Year Leigh..drinker

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Fri 12/21/12 10:53 PM

well, I didn't have to wait very long...bigsmile




Hey I surprised myself too when the words fell out of my head...haha...Cheers KC..♥

jemare's photo
Mon 12/24/12 12:17 AM
I enjoyed this read and could relate to parts of it (without sadness). A very good write Ainjel. Even better that it sounds as though the New Year may an easier one, with new paths for you to followflowerforyou

pennyg281's photo
Mon 12/24/12 05:48 AM

Thankyou Penny..Happy Holidays..♥

Hope you have a Merry Christmas, and a blessed New Year Ainjelflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Mon 12/24/12 05:20 PM
I see you flowerforyou

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Tue 12/25/12 03:33 AM
what order!!! i'm in love with your work

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Wed 12/26/12 04:50 PM
so nice to read you ainjel :) i enjoyed the truth in this, very nice.

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Wed 12/26/12 07:56 PM
I've read this about half a dozen times over the past few days and couldn't really think of a comment. It's just... really, really beautiful and I love it, Ainjel.

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Wed 12/26/12 08:11 PM
Ainjel...this has heart...

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