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The shut door in front of me isn't locked
But it's shut and I won't knock Every scenario played out in my head a hundred times I just can't bear to be denied The next door is the same as the first I can't seem to change this curse I walk away, eyes to the floor It's been a while since I've seen that door It's four walls now A tiny window for me to see A glimpse of the living What I failed to be |
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wow, good one. powerfully depressing.
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wow, good one. powerfully depressing. Thanks DaySinner. Yea, I guess I'm in a dark mood tonight but I'm glad you liked it |
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No its not depressing at all and actually it is a peek into the life and choice of a person for whom all doors in life are closed...........excellently written ..........really nice
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No its not depressing at all and actually it is a peek into the life and choice of a person for whom all doors in life are closed...........excellently written ..........really nice I thank you for your complements =) I do think though that if we knocked or opened the door ourselves we'd probably be a bit happier in our lives. In my poem the door was shut but not locked. It leaves a bit of hope for those who only see closed doors. Not taking a chance is what leads to the walls caving in. Now, if only I could take my own advise.... |
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"The shut door in front of me isn't locked"
"I just can't bear to be denied" "I can't seem to change this curse" "It's been a while since I've seen that door" Hi WOWY, what makes your write so gripping to me... "you can't bear to be denied"... but.. instead of knocking... perhaps the unlocked door is just waiting for you to push it open... mayb the one inside is stuck within those walls not knowing how to reach out or accept either.. Love your work.. 
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Edited by
WithOrWithoutYou
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Wed 12/19/12 02:19 AM
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"The shut door in front of me isn't locked" "I just can't bear to be denied" "I can't seem to change this curse" "It's been a while since I've seen that door" Hi WOWY, what makes your write so gripping to me... "you can't bear to be denied"... but.. instead of knocking... perhaps the unlocked door is just waiting for you to push it open... mayb the one inside is stuck within those walls not knowing how to reach out or accept either.. Love your work..
Thanks AthenaRose2. I think I wrote about missed opportunities in our lives which I think many of us have had. I wish you and I happiness and a loving partner if that is in the cards. Thank you for your kind words |
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The shut door in front of me isn't locked But it's shut and I won't knock Every scenario played out in my head a hundred times I just can't bear to be denied The next door is the same as the first I can't seem to change this curse I walk away, eyes to the floor It's been a while since I've seen that door It's four walls now A tiny window for me to see A glimpse of the living What I failed to be I'm with sinner on this one, wow. Kind of depressing but still very good. |
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The shut door in front of me isn't locked But it's shut and I won't knock Every scenario played out in my head a hundred times I just can't bear to be denied The next door is the same as the first I can't seem to change this curse I walk away, eyes to the floor It's been a while since I've seen that door It's four walls now A tiny window for me to see A glimpse of the living What I failed to be I'm with sinner on this one, wow. Kind of depressing but still very good. Thank you mig25. From what I understand you a bit of a peom buff so I take that as a great compliment. |
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The shut door in front of me isn't locked But it's shut and I won't knock Every scenario played out in my head a hundred times I just can't bear to be denied The next door is the same as the first I can't seem to change this curse I walk away, eyes to the floor It's been a while since I've seen that door It's four walls now A tiny window for me to see A glimpse of the living What I failed to be Self defeat very, very well expressed...I absolutely love the clean delivery !!
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The shut door in front of me isn't locked But it's shut and I won't knock Every scenario played out in my head a hundred times I just can't bear to be denied The next door is the same as the first I can't seem to change this curse I walk away, eyes to the floor It's been a while since I've seen that door It's four walls now A tiny window for me to see A glimpse of the living What I failed to be Self defeat very, very well expressed...I absolutely love the clean delivery !!
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However depressing this poem may sound, this is beautifully written and I can defintely relate to it.
Thank you!
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