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Topic: They Like It When I Bleed
kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 12/16/12 01:42 PM Edited by kc0003 on Sun 12/16/12 01:43 PM
everyone wants a poem exes want love letters written in blood lovers want to be made to feel special friends need to know if I think of them as more it’s ironic really, because none of mine have ever made a bit of difference that one still left this one never came back her, she didn’t even acknowledge hers (or me) my wrist pours out soaking the pages with deep cherry sincerity, arterial-letting openness, but it’s never enough is it? no, I lost her because she thought they were all about her I gained the wrong one by allowing her to believe a certain one was about her sometimes they mean nothing, but oh how dangerous that can be sometimes they mean everything and pass by without a ripple and still they ask... I don’t have the heart to tell them most often, you don’t get to choose the poem most often it’s the poem that does the choosing kc `12

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sun 12/16/12 01:44 PM
KC magic gracing the pages...Yes "it's the poem that does the choosing..."

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 12/16/12 01:53 PM
speaking of gracing the pages...

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 12/16/12 02:28 PM
Get out of my head this minute KC! You have captured the angst of a poet with your bare hands!... Don't know if you are familiar, but this is a favorite quote... "I have never started a poem yet whose end I knew. Writing a poem is discovering." Robert Frost

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sun 12/16/12 02:46 PM Edited by AthenaRose2 on Sun 12/16/12 02:48 PM
This is so clever, kc... you explained a poet's life to a T... tho our experiences are different they are still so similar... and it's only the poet that knows when the poem chooses us to do the telling...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 12/16/12 02:51 PM Edited by kc0003 on Sun 12/16/12 03:14 PM
Leigh, Iv’e not heard/read this, but I could have written it. I cannot tell you how many poems I have started with a short stanza, a sentence, a word. all I know of how it will end is the poem will tell me. thank you for sharing that and I will try to stay out of your head from here on... no promises

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 12/16/12 03:18 PM
AR2 more similar than we realize, I imagine but I do think it’s the same for the reader too thanks for stopping by...

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Sun 12/16/12 09:30 PM
thank you for your insights

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 12/17/12 08:48 AM Edited by s1owhand on Mon 12/17/12 08:59 AM
inspiring as it often is... "Go" http://mingle2.com/topic/show/342472

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Mon 12/17/12 03:56 PM
Awww, man. You already know I love this.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 12/17/12 05:12 PM
Yes the silence of the pen, choose's and thru your soul you touch, lift, guide and delight.. Much love to you (((Kevin)).. wishing you all that you need this Holiday season

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Mon 12/17/12 09:35 PM
Ok KC . . . yeah, you know this is nice.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 12/19/12 01:14 AM
Dayuuuuuum my friend. Love this ...and the poet!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 12/19/12 07:18 PM
day sinner s1ow p_p mom mig a-girl thank you all for your comments.

kissablekiss Joined Mon 03/08/10 Posts: 8528	Tue 12/25/12 12:20 PM
my wrist pours out soaking the pages with deep cherry sincerity, arterial-letting openness, but it’s never enough is it? Along with the Ending