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Topic: Will You Be My Lover?
AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Mon 12/10/12 02:39 PM
I feel you there watching… eating my words… choking on the silence… aching to be heard… sooooooooooo many faces just empty spaces you know how I hate being the mouse the cat chases… Love is more than emotion it compels pure devotion blowing the mind wide open where only “the one” cares to go in… You breathe me in deep laughing as we weep and no other will dare impede what we share… But… You hide from my sight what I look for with fright… Who will next feel your aim? Do we all play in pain? You think I resist the soft touch of your lips… But I run to escape my biggest mistake… To give my heart true depends mostly on you… Can you break my will fast? Can you make your will last? Time will wait as we look to the end are we foe or are we friend? Search we on to find another? Or true to me you’ll be my lover… Copyright© Athena Rose 12/10/12

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Mon 12/10/12 03:11 PM
this is very beautiful Athena

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Mon 12/10/12 03:44 PM
Thank youSinner

MisLopez Joined Tue 11/16/10 Posts: 85	Mon 12/10/12 03:54 PM
Beautiful work, as usual!!

soufiehere Joined Sat 10/24/09 Posts: 45401	Mon 12/10/12 04:08 PM
Very nice :-)

Salgra5 Joined Mon 11/26/12 Posts: 29	Mon 12/10/12 06:25 PM
Awesome i like it

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Mon 12/10/12 09:12 PM
Oh Athena you must know your work is exceptional. Loved this one!!

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/11/12 12:10 AM
MisLopez... thank you for your kind words Soufie... it's so nice to see you here.. I've seen you on other boards and your profile picture is spellbinding.. thank you for reading my work and for responding to it.. Salgra... your comments are always appreciated as well.. I'm so glad you like it, as I too enjoy your work... thank you for posting.. Mig.. once again you honor me.. I'm so happy that you enjoy my work.. as I am a fan of yours..

Muaness Joined Mon 11/05/12 Posts: 2993	Tue 12/11/12 12:11 PM Edited by Muaness on Tue 12/11/12 12:12 PM
Love is more than emotion it compels pure devotion Without devotion love becomes mere infactuation becomes an abuse living only in the tongue never seen around the heart its use becomes flattery used as a key to unlock a bossom a bossom it neglects its keeper. without devotion love becomes a crossroad without a single sign. Thanks for this one Athena Rose

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/11/12 12:18 PM
Thank you, Muaness.. I feel your words intensely as I whole heartedly agree.. love becomes mere infactuation living only in the tongue Without devotion love becomes mere infactuation becomes an abuse living only in the tongue never seen around the heart its use becomes flattery used as a key to unlock a bossom a bossom it neglects its keeper. without devotion love becomes a crossroad without a single sign.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 12/12/12 07:12 AM


AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 12/12/12 07:50 AM
UR so sweet Jeff.. always..

Xotic_Blue_Eyes Joined Sun 12/16/12 Posts: 86	Tue 12/25/12 08:59 PM
With so many poems on here, and so many people, do i have enough time to read them all. Probably not but i am reading this one. And it is very wonderful and inspiring.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 12/26/12 12:31 AM
With so many poems on here, and so many people, do i have enough time to read them all. Probably not but i am reading this one. And it is very wonderful and inspiring. I'm flattered that you would choose my work to comment on, XBE... and I do appreciate your kind and generous response...