Topic: My Desert
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Sun 08/05/07 04:21 PM
Here i am walking this land
Sun streaked skin
In the heat of the desert
Dripping beads of sweat
As i walk along.....
Searching for you
Hot earth beneath my feet
Dress clinging to my skin
Prayed for rain
Only tears came
Rushing over me
I'm drowning in my desert
When will love rain down upon me
When will love find me
Pull me from this abyss
I'm drowing in my desert

pkh's photo
Sun 08/05/07 05:24 PM
It will happen again,Jen.Your a sweet person,so try and believe it will happen,maybe not today or tommorrow,but it will.flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 08/05/07 05:26 PM
I love the metaphor of drowning in the desert.

bobbyblue's photo
Sun 08/05/07 05:46 PM
Great piece and keep the faithflowerforyou flowerforyou