Topic: After the Rain | |
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Right after my storm; as the winds stopped and ceased
There was a great calm; as I sighed in relief And though there is damage; from the previous rage I can start a new chapter; and can turn a new page But as the dust settles; and I clearly can see I look through the rubble; though I would rather flee Though all is destroyed; and there nothing but sand I can still trust in my God; as He helps me to stand As I survey the damage; and I calculate cost The pain swells up in me; as I see all Ive lost Though I tremble in horror; and I ask the Lord why? I know that God loves me; and its ok to cry. Its so overwhelming; as my emotions do flare Its easy to doubt; that my God really cares And yes the storm passed; yet the fierce winds were real Its so hard to move on; as I struggle to heal My eyes fill with water; my mouth gets all dry My heart sinks in despair; as I long to die My emotions, they hurt me; I hunger and thirst My heart; it aches badly; I feel as if it will burst The rain is now gone and the skies are now blue Yet I still haven’t healed; from what I’ve gone through And now time has passed; as life continues on I still live in darkness; even though the nights gone I know this sounds gloomy; what else can I say? That God will heal my heart; as I seek Him and pray? My worst fears behind me; or that’s what they say I once felt victorious; I now feel like prey But all is not lost; though I feel that it is For my heart isn’t mine, as it belongs to Him And my God is faithful; I'll trust Him till I die I will lift His name up; I will lift it up high My God is my healer; he will one day heal me And though I am now mourning; I will one day be free For here is a truth; that I will try to explain The Son always shines; even after the rain! Written by Amie |
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welcome...
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Very nice write
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Very nice write
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thank you. I write from my life experiences, from my struggles and different things like that. Writing helps me get through things, its like therapy to me.
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Its great to have that outlet. Post more. I find your faith touching.
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Nice write. welcome to mingle and the writing forum.
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Hey this is and awesome write.
I don't know exactly what your storm was about but hey you were left with some phenominal talent if you can put that kind of creativity into words. Things come things go People come and people go as is God's circl of life as you seem to know deep down. So go out and knock the world down to size young lady because you sure have the right stuff when it comes to writing!!!!! |
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really liked it. |
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Moving words and glad they help you..
Here's a link to Annie Lennox's song 'Oh God', which has a similar feel to it.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g_QIsUYgTwQ |
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I've had more then my share of storms for sure. I'll post more poems later when I'm home and not mobile :)
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thank you :)
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Nice write....
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Its s0 inspiring..
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Thank you
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