Topic: Broken Reflection
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Sun 07/29/07 01:26 AM
Staring in the mirror
at the girl i left behind
searching for that something
i just can seem to find

The same eyes stare back at me
the same lips on my face
still i sense something is missing
that i cannot replace

My hand caresses glass
and the stranger does the same
yet i cannot meet the eyes
reflecting so much shame

Only when i cry for her
does she begin to weep
for all the broken promises
that i could never keep

Her sad smile haunts me
til i realize its my own
simply a glimpse of the pain
that i have never shown

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Sun 07/29/07 02:11 AM
sad beautiful
flowerforyou

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Sun 07/29/07 02:15 AM
Crimson_Soul that was really great, welcome to the site hope to see you post more soon. bigsmile

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Sun 07/29/07 03:30 PM
thanks for reading my work guys. your appreciation is inspiring, and no worries about more on the way. They'll be sorry i ever found this thread. Lmao.

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Sun 07/29/07 03:41 PM
nice poem :smile:cant wait to hear more