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Topic: Just One Day
ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Sun 10/15/06 02:18 PM
Walk in my shoes See what I see Feel what I feel Hear the voices I hear Love who I love Just one day Is all i will ake Just to see what it is like to be me- Enter my light Walk in my foot steps Touch what I touch See the beauty in the darkness that is me Feel the pain in the darkness that is me Loathe who I loathe Just one day Is all it will take Just what it is like to be me- Enter my darkness

hosstin18 Joined Mon 08/07/06 Posts: 445	Sun 10/15/06 02:22 PM
i like it says what i always say walk i mile in someone ones before juddging thats how i feel poet

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Sun 10/15/06 02:25 PM
I must say you are very good with your words and it does get the point over very well girl ya got a nak for writing keep it up I see a Book of Poems in progress.

Jimi366 Joined Fri 09/15/06 Posts: 672	Sun 10/15/06 02:48 PM
"Just to see what it is like to be me- enter my light" is my favorite line from this. We all have that side of darkness about us that we either fear, don't understand, or don't want to admit.

dwsand Joined Sat 10/14/06 Posts: 3	Sun 10/15/06 03:24 PM
very good, feels like we are in the same boat! more! dws

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