in the waking moment
as revelation hits
all your dreams and plans
are just a pile of sh*t

the failure of the conscious mind
to cope with everyday
drives away all sanity
and in the end you'll pay

you dreamt a dream of everything
that shattered just like glass
the tinkling of the falling scenes
sounds out "kiss my as*"

when everything you wanted
and thought you had at last
trickles through your fingers
the dreams fade so fast

as you plan your little plan
and dream your big dreams
remember all the roadwork Man
just isn't what it seems

the pain and sorrows linger
like a knife wound in your back
it's just the price we pay in life
to keep us in the black



Thanks Eileen for the help when i needed it...

I really didn't do much Hanged.....but thank you for the nod..


You did a wonderful job on this poem...very profound

Great poem. Sounds like what I'm going through now. I could see the light at the end of the tunnel and in the blink of an eye, the light was gone but the pain is still there. Life marches on, just having a hard time getting the boots on.

SALUDE""!!!!!
good job!

Thanks all...

Good poem, Hanged!

((((Hanged)))) Awesome indeed,, Yes life does indeed have its ups and downs,,, The good and the bad,, yet when we seem all is lost, remember there is light at the end of the tunnel and in your Heart,, Bravo,,,

((((HANG)))))))))beautiful, and so aptly put about the pain we go through. Thank you for sharing.
Snuggles

Awesome job HangedMan yeah this road of life we take is never smooth going and don't always give us what we expect in the end. You should really post more here you have the knack and very good

Hanged, i love your writing. quit being so modest.

Thanks once again for all the comments....and taking the time to read my ramblings.....