Topic: Dear God, | |
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For such a very long period of time
My whole life, to be more precise. I saw no future for myself Only obligations and unending sacrifice. I cried myself to sleep every night And, planned the day I would end it all. The peace of death, the stillness of dark I heard it always, it was my call. I thought you couldn’t hear my cries Or worse yet, you had no care. Actually, I knew deep down in my soul I didn’t deserve the love that was my share. But, you didn’t forsake me like I believed You were waiting for me to wake up and see. All I had to do was come to realize That I was worthy and set myself free. It really is a funny thought now The chains, they weren’t real. Because when they were wrapped around me I could have sworn they were made of steel. Thank you for showing me and never giving up I know I was so stubborn sometimes. The prison we make can seem so real Even though it’s all in our minds. |
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Awesome! Great job!
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Amen
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Awesome! Great job! Thanks. |
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((((((((((((RUTHIE)))))))))))))))))
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An insightful thought that gives hope for others, very nice.
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Good right very heartfelt...
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It really is a funny thought now The chains, they weren’t real. Because when they were wrapped around me I could have sworn they were made of steel. I've feel the same way, it's like you are living rent free in my head. |
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It really is a funny thought now The chains, they weren’t real. Because when they were wrapped around me I could have sworn they were made of steel. I've feel the same way, it's like you are living rent free in my head. Seems only fair since you live in mine. Thank you, everyone. |
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very very incredibly poem.
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I loved this. great write. :)
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Heartfelt
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What a great ending....
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Thank you, What a great poem It is like it just come from my head.
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Thank you, What a great poem It is like it just come from my head.
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Thanks everyone.
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