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(See if you can spot the pattern.)
Enjoy the Silence Breathe It’s only us Lift me up If I had 1000 words Hold my hand My heart of glass Take me to the clouds Relight my fire Unbreakable Loneliness; It’s a sin Ashes to ashes Poetry in motion Outside of heaven I never had a dream come true ‘Till the day I met you Everything changes As I burn to a cinder The fear A message in a bottle Testify I need you now, more than ever Stranger in paradise As I love you In a moment like this Would it matter? Save your love Whispers in the dark Broken wings I cannot fly without your faith Come as you are As I wait and bleed I know you were waiting Save your love Sad, sweet dreamer Nothing ever changes Seasons in the sun A chain reaction Do you really want to hurt me? Lithium My drug of choice If tomorrow never comes I want you to know Never alone So long as I have your love I’d walk forever Just to hear you say It doesn’t matter anymore Cold; as I remain Still running Rest my son No more sorrow The drugs don’t work Taillights fade If only paradise was half as nice Comfort found only in your arms As my eyes drift closed Serenity Just ignore the world Enjoy the silence Midnight Reveries Copyright (c) 2012 All Rights Reserved |
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beautful writings
tomrrow will always come wordman hope u will stay uplifted (hee hee) 
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beautful writings tomrrow will always come wordman hope u will stay uplifted (hee hee)
Thanks Sweet. :) I'm such a hypocrite to myself. Said yesterday, I'd never post again.. -.- ..stupid addictions. :/ ..glad you liked it. Did you see my hidden pattern? :D |
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beautful writings tomrrow will always come wordman hope u will stay uplifted (hee hee)
Thanks Sweet. :) I'm such a hypocrite to myself. Said yesterday, I'd never post again.. -.- ..stupid addictions. :/ ..glad you liked it. Did you see my hidden pattern? :D hidden pattern? no - I would not notice such a thing because I am a romantic meaning type person let me look again & if I don't see it u can tell me (just like with the symbol language you have kimosabe) I will tell u that you must post again - glad changed ur mind this poem is really very good 
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Hehe.
Yeah. It took me two hours to write this one up. :O But I ultimately  it. :)
Glad I decided to keep doing so to. :D |
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Hehe. Yeah. It took me two hours to write this one up. :O But I ultimately it. :)
Glad I decided to keep doing so to. :D |
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No luck figuring it out I take it?
..or didja give up? :D |
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No luck figuring it out I take it? ..or didja give up? :D a little bit uv both 
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Awe...
:( *whispers* :D |
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thank you
how clever why the frownie face??? |
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Frownie face - Cause you couldn't find it. :)
And I know, I try. :D |
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Frownie face - Cause you couldn't find it. :) And I know, I try. :D :) |
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I'm not seeing it either. Counting syllables isn't working. The first stanza has a pattern of 3 then 4 syllables that repeats a little, but it isn't maintained. Stanzas are 18, 21, and 21 lines, which doesn't mean anything to me. I'm not catching any particular alliteration or assonance or consonance. The lines in general go from shorter to longer within each stanza, but I have a feeling that isn't it. Give us a hint.
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I'm not seeing it either. Counting syllables isn't working. The first stanza has a pattern of 3 then 4 syllables that repeats a little, but it isn't maintained. Stanzas are 18, 21, and 21 lines, which doesn't mean anything to me. I'm not catching any particular alliteration or assonance or consonance. The lines in general go from shorter to longer within each stanza, but I have a feeling that isn't it. Give us a hint. Try "singing" it. :D And for the record, no, I don't at all mean that literally. :P |
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I'm not seeing it either. Counting syllables isn't working. The first stanza has a pattern of 3 then 4 syllables that repeats a little, but it isn't maintained. Stanzas are 18, 21, and 21 lines, which doesn't mean anything to me. I'm not catching any particular alliteration or assonance or consonance. The lines in general go from shorter to longer within each stanza, but I have a feeling that isn't it. Give us a hint. ..wait you're counting stuff? o.O Oh, geez. Don't do that. :) It's not that complicated, everyone seems to keep over analyzing it. So, to save people the stress and headaches.. Each line. Is the title of a song. :) |
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They're all song lyrics! Nicely done sir.
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They're all song lyrics! Nicely done sir.
Well, yeah, but more or less, just the title of songs. Save your love - had two renditions, I adore them both, those used it twice. :D Chef, you ever check out my poetry site? :O |
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Edited by
txmomof2
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Sat 02/18/12 11:58 PM
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Since you do not like flowers I will start giving you these
Comments - Graphics Once again job well done :) |
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They're all song lyrics! Nicely done sir.
Well, yeah, but more or less, just the title of songs. Save your love - had two renditions, I adore them both, those used it twice. :D Chef, you ever check out my poetry site? :O I will on Monday when I can use a computer that isn't this non-adobe flash-allowing apple POS. lol |
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They're all song lyrics! Nicely done sir.
Well, yeah, but more or less, just the title of songs. Save your love - had two renditions, I adore them both, those used it twice. :D Chef, you ever check out my poetry site? :O I will on Monday when I can use a computer that isn't this non-adobe flash-allowing apple POS. lol Ah, right forgot about that. Oh, and thanks. :P Oh and yes, much better 2Kids. :) Kisses last longer.:P |
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