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Dale031124
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Sat 02/04/12 08:45 AM
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Hi. Would you walk with me?
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I am sure you are walkable with........I think your profile should be more upbeat and positive......a few more pictures of yourself doing the hobbies our enjoy.....don't talk too much about the past but more about what you enjoy and who you are......
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Hi. Would you walk with me? Join in the forums and BE ALL YOU CAN BE,,but keep on BEING YOU! And have some fun here,,as you make some new friends.. Peace, Love and BE YOU!!! |
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If it were me, I would take out everything after “start?” and add a new paragraph starting with “What I want...”
Other than adding paragraphs – it’s too hard to read block text and will put people off...it reads fine IMO. Good luck! |
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Hi. Would you walk with me? You have as many pics of your bike than you do of yourself, so I wouldn't have thought you'd walk ANYWHERE. |
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Hi. Would you walk with me? You have as many pics of your bike than you do of yourself, so I wouldn't have thought you'd walk ANYWHERE. Sometimes I like to walk and sometimes I like to ride. Someday if I'm in Pa. again or if you are in La., maybe you and I could ride together. |
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Hi. Would you walk with me? You have as many pics of your bike than you do of yourself, so I wouldn't have thought you'd walk ANYWHERE. Sometimes I like to walk and sometimes I like to ride. Someday if I'm in Pa. again or if you are in La., maybe you and I could ride together. No doubt. I'm always looking for an excuse to ditch work and go riding. |
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Hi. Would you walk with me? You have as many pics of your bike than you do of yourself, so I wouldn't have thought you'd walk ANYWHERE. Sometimes I like to walk and sometimes I like to ride. Someday if I'm in Pa. again or if you are in La., maybe you and I could ride together. No doubt. I'm always looking for an excuse to ditch work and go riding. Same here. |
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Walk a mile in my shoes honey. |
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Hello!
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Hello! |
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If it were me, I would take out everything after “start?” and add a new paragraph starting with “What I want...” Other than adding paragraphs – it’s too hard to read block text and will put people off...it reads fine IMO. Good luck! Absolutely agree with 42! Everything after start is a downward spiral. Positive attracts positive. And post at least one photo with a big ole' toothy smile. No need to force her to inquire about the condition of your teeth. |
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