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Topic: Living
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Fri 02/03/12 01:19 AM
Living I want to feel the breeze just once more before time decides to pass me by I want to feel the sunset’s warmth and gentle spray of the ocean’s temperament while living the first day of my last days in the midst paradise and beautiful dreams I want to sing one more song dance one more dance and live without fear or hopelessness Tomorrow will come soon enough

pikles Joined Tue 10/12/10 Posts: 247	Fri 02/03/12 01:26 AM
Nice dude, I rly like the things you post up. Keep up the great work!

taurean76 Joined Wed 01/11/12 Posts: 15	Fri 02/03/12 01:47 AM
this is real nice.keep it up.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Fri 02/03/12 03:13 AM
Really nice Mig..

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/03/12 05:34 AM
Living I want to feel the breeze just once more before time decides to pass me by I want to feel the sunset’s warmth and gentle spray of the ocean’s temperament while living the first day of my last days in the midst paradise and beautiful dreams I want to sing one more song dance one more dance and live without fear or hopelessness Tomorrow will come soon enough Oh Mig...this is so tender....I love how you write...

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Fri 02/03/12 06:42 AM
So true((((Mig)))))

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