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Death
The room was in disarray life’s relevance was strewn about broken pictures letters and love And he sat by thinking of all the memories searching for one of them to mean something Pain was deeper than the demons grasp so the only logical conclusion was a self-inflicted act of mercy And he sat by watching all the memories fade into the river that flowed from his wrist |
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SOME rivers flow,just to FEEL, their moving.
others move to reach the Sea's. And a few, travel the short distance to their forever's.. Nice write Mig,, and GOD'S tears, shall wash away all the floods.,,,,  
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Nicely done Mig..
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Love that pic Terry.
@Mig So heartfelt 
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Love that pic Terry. @Mig So heartfelt
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Death The room was in disarray life’s relevance was strewn about broken pictures letters and love And he sat by thinking of all the memories searching for one of them to mean something Pain was deeper than the demons grasp so the only logical conclusion was a self-inflicted act of mercy And he sat by watching all the memories fade into the river that flowed from his wrist Mig, will you always write in a way that each surpasses the last?...I certainly hope so!...This is so.... I started to say good, but that is not right....so amazingly expressed....TY for posting!! (((You)))....
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I'm humbled by the kind comments. I really am. Thanks so much for the compliments . . . all of them. It means a lot that so many wonderful poets think my work is pretty good.
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Wow...I could really picture in my minds eye the man sitting at the edge, the feelings expressed on his face and the tormented peace on his face as he succeeded with his self destruction. Was saddening. However, leave it to you to create an emotional picture with words. Even though the topic is risky...it is some people's reality...and you did an outstanding job conveying it with words.
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Wow...I could really picture in my minds eye the man sitting at the edge, the feelings expressed on his face and the tormented peace on his face as he succeeded with his self destruction. Was saddening. However, leave it to you to create an emotional picture with words. Even though the topic is risky...it is some people's reality...and you did an outstanding job conveying it with words.
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