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Topic: "Ask"
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Sun 01/29/12 07:06 AM

"Ask"

Could I love you if you let me…
Could I make you laugh and cry…
Could I take you to that place…
Where only lovers fly…

Can I heal your open wounds...
Walk you toward the light…
Thaw a frozen heart…
Soothe a restless night…

Are you a man who needs love…
The kind that I can give…
Do you dream in present tense…
Do you want to live….

Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

Do you feel what I feel…
Can you see the sun…
Let it shine on your face…
Or will you turn and run…

Are we just two people…
Chance meeting in a crowd…
Can you reach the mount with me…
Cast off your tattered shroud…

I am just a woman…
With lines upon my face…
Each one tells a story…
Of life, of love, of grace…

Like the road I travel…
A steep and winding path…
I've stumbled and I've fallen…
I've cried and then I've laughed…

Do you want to know me…
Look inside my soul…
Do you want to touch my heart…
Stay with me, grow old….

Are you different or the same…
As those who live my past…
Are you the one I never found…
Is this new love the last….

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Sun 01/29/12 07:09 AM
I am just a woman…
With lines upon my face…
Each one tells a story…
Of life, of love, of grace…

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: flowers

Ladylid2012's photo
Sun 01/29/12 07:11 AM
:heart: flowerforyou

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Sun 01/29/12 07:15 AM

I am just a woman…
With lines upon my face…
Each one tells a story…
Of life, of love, of grace…

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: flowers


(((((:heart: Tazz:heart: )))))

You are so special.....flowerforyou

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Sun 01/29/12 07:17 AM

:heart: flowerforyou


LadyLid.....You/me, opposites in some things, but alike in more.....TY:heart:

Optomistic69's photo
Sun 01/29/12 07:28 AM
Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

The Jury is still out..drinker

Ladylid2012's photo
Sun 01/29/12 07:31 AM


:heart: flowerforyou


LadyLid.....You/me, opposites in some things, but alike in more.....TY:heart:


Most of us are alike when we look for the similarities and not the differences... we are women, we are mothers, we have the same heart.

Your welcome happy

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Sun 01/29/12 07:42 AM

Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

The Jury is still out..drinker


At the risk of appearing rude Opto, perhaps it is best to leave the jury out, at least until anger and false pride can be disposed of....Thank you for reading, the comment I could do without....:smile:

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Sun 01/29/12 07:46 AM



:heart: flowerforyou


LadyLid.....You/me, opposites in some things, but alike in more.....TY:heart:


Most of us are alike when we look for the similarities and not the differences... we are women, we are mothers, we have the same heart.

Your welcome happy


flowerforyou ...Happy too...

Optomistic69's photo
Sun 01/29/12 07:53 AM


Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

The Jury is still out..drinker


At the risk of appearing rude Opto, perhaps it is best to leave the jury out, at least until anger and false pride can be disposed of....Thank you for reading, the comment I could do without....:smile:


Point Taken..

Your writing is Very Good....drinker

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Sun 01/29/12 07:58 AM



Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

The Jury is still out..drinker


At the risk of appearing rude Opto, perhaps it is best to leave the jury out, at least until anger and false pride can be disposed of....Thank you for reading, the comment I could do without....:smile:


Point Taken..

Your writing is Very Good....drinker


Thank you!...It is time for peace and perhaps someday friendship...After all, good friends are rare and beautiful, well worth the investment required to form and keep....:wink:

s1owhand's photo
Sun 01/29/12 08:10 AM
inspired "Lovers"

flowerforyou

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Sun 01/29/12 08:34 AM

inspired "Lovers"

flowerforyou



flowers Perhaps, probably, yes....shades

TY:heart:

jemare's photo
Sun 01/29/12 09:10 AM


"Ask"

Could I love you if you let me…
Could I make you laugh and cry…
Could I take you to that place…
Where only lovers fly…

Can I heal your open wounds...
Walk you toward the light…
Thaw a frozen heart…
Soothe a restless night…

Are you a man who needs love…
The kind that I can give…
Do you dream in present tense…
Do you want to live….

Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

Do you feel what I feel…
Can you see the sun…
Let it shine on your face…
Or will you turn and run…

Are we just two people…
Chance meeting in a crowd…
Can you reach the mount with me…
Cast off your tattered shroud…

I am just a woman…
With lines upon my face…
Each one tells a story…
Of life, of love, of grace…

Like the road I travel…
A steep and winding path…
I've stumbled and I've fallen…
I've cried and then I've laughed…

Do you want to know me…
Look inside my soul…
Do you want to touch my heart…
Stay with me, grow old….

Are you different or the same…
As those who live my past…
Are you the one I never found…
Is this new love the last….




Now that's a poem with a message I wish I could send to someone. VERY NICE writeflowerforyou

Optomistic69's photo
Sun 01/29/12 09:11 AM




Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

The Jury is still out..drinker


At the risk of appearing rude Opto, perhaps it is best to leave the jury out, at least until anger and false pride can be disposed of....Thank you for reading, the comment I could do without....:smile:


Point Taken..

Your writing is Very Good....drinker


Thank you!...It is time for peace and perhaps someday friendship...After all, good friends are rare and beautiful, well worth the investment required to form and keep....:wink:


Peace...flowerforyou

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Sun 01/29/12 09:13 AM





Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

The Jury is still out..drinker


At the risk of appearing rude Opto, perhaps it is best to leave the jury out, at least until anger and false pride can be disposed of....Thank you for reading, the comment I could do without....:smile:


Point Taken..

Your writing is Very Good....drinker


Thank you!...It is time for peace and perhaps someday friendship...After all, good friends are rare and beautiful, well worth the investment required to form and keep....:wink:


Peace...flowerforyou


Absolutely and about time!!!:wink:


She grudgingly hands him a posy.....flowerforyou

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Sun 01/29/12 09:18 AM



"Ask"

Could I love you if you let me…
Could I make you laugh and cry…
Could I take you to that place…
Where only lovers fly…

Can I heal your open wounds...
Walk you toward the light…
Thaw a frozen heart…
Soothe a restless night…

Are you a man who needs love…
The kind that I can give…
Do you dream in present tense…
Do you want to live….

Is your today tomorrow…
Only looking back…
Was it real or just pretend…
A cinematic cast…

Do you feel what I feel…
Can you see the sun…
Let it shine on your face…
Or will you turn and run…

Are we just two people…
Chance meeting in a crowd…
Can you reach the mount with me…
Cast off your tattered shroud…

I am just a woman…
With lines upon my face…
Each one tells a story…
Of life, of love, of grace…

Like the road I travel…
A steep and winding path…
I've stumbled and I've fallen…
I've cried and then I've laughed…

Do you want to know me…
Look inside my soul…
Do you want to touch my heart…
Stay with me, grow old….

Are you different or the same…
As those who live my past…
Are you the one I never found…
Is this new love the last….




Now that's a poem with a message I wish I could send to someone. VERY NICE writeflowerforyou


Jemare!!! Thank you!!...flowerforyou

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Sun 01/29/12 09:27 AM
good poetic writings, elaborate and ingenous write up, you made me remember africas most influential celebrity, THE LITERARY GENIUS PROF CHINUA ACHEBE.

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Sun 01/29/12 09:43 AM

good poetic writings, elaborate and ingenous write up, you made me remember africas most influential celebrity, THE LITERARY GENIUS PROF CHINUA ACHEBE.


blushing High praise....I am humbled....TY:heart: :heart: :heart:

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Sun 01/29/12 10:40 AM
Do you dream in present tense…
Do you want to live….

now I do..

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