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| Topic: "Doesn't Live Here Anymore" | |
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Nice flow,,,I LIKE IT!,,, 
Thanks! Guy with 10,000 bandanas. :D Hmm.. I wonder why everyone's commenting this one? I wrote 5.. This one got 18 comments.. To like 1 between the other 4. :O .....you made me think, better yet, recollect words of wisdom from a very loving friend: ...when you give ( love, of yourself)...do it like you were with an "eye dropper". One at a time.....I think in some things.... its worthwhile to consider. My food for thought for today. 
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Ok, well, I tried to make it rhyme.. Still unsure if I like it.. ..but since it's done.. Meh. What the H, right? “Doesn’t Live Here Anymore” The doors are locked, the lights are off A car pulls up, it’s not so tough Run to the bedroom, pull all the shades Close my eyes and think of brighter days Then there it is, a knock upon my door “Go away!” Because I want nothing more My mind is tired and emotions are wore Your love doesn't live here anymore The sun goes down, the moon rises up Just the end of another busy day Rest in bed as thoughts fail to breathe Don’t bother calling; I've nothing to say We’re just like a record, stuck on repeat Every time I come back you just push me away I was faithful, you were the whore All my passion, you found a way to ignore Now you wonder; why love doesn't live here anymore Nearing the stages of a deep sleep There you are; but no longer do I weep Your love is like the shadow All it knows is just how to creep Again I hear, a knock upon my door Just leave me alone, nothing left to take Mind is numb, my eyes are sore Nightmares of pain; such a mistake Your love doesn’t live here anymore Letting go is never easy, but when it is forced upon us by the others actions like you describe, when the person we are letting go of vacillates, returns time after time, speaking from the other side of a locked door, trying to convince us it will be different this time, convince us they have changed....that's when letting go gets tough, that's when letting sucks us dry........Nice write sweetie.... 
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Oh....kay...
I wasn't complaining.. Just thought it's odd the one I don't like.. Everyone's viewing and commenting. That's all. |
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yes sweetie, we all got togather and decided to shake you up a bit. lol.
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Wow, I really like the way you wrote that poem. That is good. Thanks for sharing that with us all.
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Sin all of your stuff is amazing. You have a wonderful gift. I think alot of us can relate to this poem its never easy letting go. :) enjoyed the white my friend.
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Thank you. Penny. :)
..and thank you Love. :D |
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