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Topic: "Secret Fairy Tale"
Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Mon 01/02/12 09:18 AM
Pain It lingers behind the façade A mask of smiles Yet I can still feel her tears It boils within Hindering her progression Aiming for that happier place Devoted wholly to acting Arriving in a place of solitude Where she no longer remembers Why she clings to her pillow at night Constantly wishing upon the stars A damsel in distress Ever yearning for her prince charming Praying in a barely audible whisper Always wishing for her fairy tale Memory I don’t think she recalls me Even though I’m always there Waiting to pick up the pieces From another prince Who fell short of expectations Crawling across the floor I slowly gather the pieces Somehow She still fails to notice me If only she’d look my way I know all your secrets And those dormant emotions Drawing my sword I’d fight your dragon Without fear, without regret For even if I perished At least I did so For a cause worth fighting I know I am no prince There is no royal lineage No golden chariot that awaits us both I have no kingdom And I have no servants But even a peasant like me Wants to have his fairy tale Oh Rapunsel Throw down your golden locks Or let me wake you with a kiss I’d search every house Rummage through every village Just to find the princess Who owns this glass slipper You are the beauty The very reason why rainbows exist I see you in everything At least all that holds meaning I am no prince No fabric of royalty But I can still be your hero If only you’d let me I can show you the start Where true loves begins If you’ll be my damsel I’ll be your hero And together we can make Our fairy tale ending 01.02.12

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Mon 01/02/12 09:21 AM
The last line should read.. "Our happily ever after." I forgot to change it when I copy and pasted. :X

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 01/02/12 02:30 PM
Either ending, cool write..

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Mon 01/02/12 05:38 PM
Thanks Ainjel. :) At least, you tell me what you think. :)

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 01/02/12 07:11 PM
But I can still be your hero If only you’d let me These two lines, have been my thoughts many times in this life. Yet never having that chance to try.... This is a very good write man..

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Mon 01/02/12 07:28 PM
Thanks iam. :] One day you'll have that chance.. I know it. You're great and decent guy.. ..but nice guys finish last.. So, nice guys need patience. I'm working on mine. Just keep at it. One day, that damsel will come a yellin'. :D

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 01/02/12 08:22 PM
Thanks iam. :] One day you'll have that chance.. I know it. You're great and decent guy.. ..but nice guys finish last.. So, nice guys need patience. I'm working on mine. Just keep at it. One day, that damsel will come a yellin'. :D I've been on here over five years now,,and I have met and dated some ladies from here and it has been a very learned experience to go through. I still await that one woman who can be what she says she is,,and lives at what she told me she lived as daily,,The problems with Internet dating is that after you have been on here for awhile,,and DO have some relationship trials,,I think many will view you as a player or a person who MUST have some major issues or they would even THINK ALL THAT,,just because they wonder and many DO pass out false-hoods about others,,and its MORE a place where MANY just want a Hook-Up,,and no real thoughts as to sharing their life with another,,,and the real ones here, look more for a solid PERFECT in every way person,,because in their lives they have found so many who like I feel,,are NOT honest with who they project themselves as on here... But,,I'm still here for the reasoning that I feel a PART of this place inside me,,and the many true friends here who also stay here. AND IF,,a woman does find me who is a real talker and liver of her truth,,I MIGHT,,,find her to be my one and only,,and as for hook ups,,I TRY NOT to be ONE,,,I have a hard time just TRYING to meet a friend from here for coffee or dinner,,and THATS just to feel MORE a real friend to each other.. I live a life that FEW COULD EVEN TRY TO LIVE AS.. I drive a truck and spend everyday,,and every night,,alone and seperated from ANYONE who even knows me,,its like solitary confinement in a prison,,,,and THATS been my job and life now for thirty years,,The confinememnt has only been about fifteen years of this weekly living life,,so ON HERE,,ARE MY ONLY FRIENDS IN THIS LIFE TO HAVE AROUND ME DAILY,,, BUT,,,,Life is what it is man,,,,Thanks for your thoughts and keep on writing,,,

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Mon 01/02/12 08:25 PM
Thanks iam. :] One day you'll have that chance.. I know it. You're great and decent guy.. ..but nice guys finish last.. So, nice guys need patience. I'm working on mine. Just keep at it. One day, that damsel will come a yellin'. :D I've been on here over five years now,,and I have met and dated some ladies from here and it has been a very learned experience to go through. I still await that one woman who can be what she says she is,,and lives at what she told me she lived as daily,,The problems with Internet dating is that after you have been on here for awhile,,and DO have some relationship trials,,I think many will view you as a player or a person who MUST have some major issues or they would even THINK ALL THAT,,just because they wonder and many DO pass out false-hoods about others,,and its MORE a place where MANY just want a Hook-Up,,and no real thoughts as to sharing their life with another,,,and the real ones here, look more for a solid PERFECT in every way person,,because in their lives they have found so many who like I feel,,are NOT honest with who they project themselves as on here... But,,I'm still here for the reasoning that I feel a PART of this place inside me,,and the many true friends here who also stay here. AND IF,,a woman does find me who is a real talker and liver of her truth,,I MIGHT,,,find her to be my one and only,,and as for hook ups,,I TRY NOT to be ONE,,,I have a hard time just TRYING to meet a friend from here for coffee or dinner,,and THATS just to feel MORE a real friend to each other.. I live a life that FEW COULD EVEN TRY TO LIVE AS.. I drive a truck and spend everyday,,and every night,,alone and seperated from ANYONE who even knows me,,its like solitary confinement in a prison,,,,and THATS been my job and life now for thirty years,,The confinememnt has only been about fifteen years of this weekly living life,,so ON HERE,,ARE MY ONLY FRIENDS IN THIS LIFE TO HAVE AROUND ME DAILY,,, BUT,,,,Life is what it is man,,,,Thanks for your thoughts and keep on writing,,, Well, got me beat. :D Uber valid points. As for the trucking thing, guessed as much from your picture. :] Even so, I still wish you nothing but the best.. ..as for writing, well.. Beat your candy arse ima keep writing.. Till my fingers fall off.. and I type with stubs. :D

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 01/02/12 08:39 PM
Well, got me beat. :D Uber valid points. As for the trucking thing, guessed as much from your picture. :] Even so, I still wish you nothing but the best.. ..as for writing, well.. Beat your candy arse ima keep writing.. Till my fingers fall off.. and I type with stubs. :D candy arse,,,, O'RIGHTY STUBBY!!!

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Mon 01/02/12 08:42 PM
..lol, got something against candy arses? :D

Katrrine Joined Fri 05/27/11 Posts: 100	Wed 01/04/12 02:28 PM
wow, very good!

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Wed 01/04/12 02:32 PM
wow, very good! Thanks! :)

machug Joined Sun 09/04/11 Posts: 6601	Thu 01/05/12 10:16 PM
I can relate so much with the first part. Unrequited love...?? Sensitive and thought provoking. Very cool write, indeed. Loved it.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Thu 01/05/12 10:27 PM
I can relate so much with the first part. Unrequited love...?? Sensitive and thought provoking. Very cool write, indeed. Loved it. :] ..thanks, I wrote that the day I first met someone on here. I held little expectations, of course, then.. ..but now.. ..now I know where that feeling came from. So, I'm glad you relate. Thanks again for you sweet comments. :]

afriQueen22 Joined Tue 10/25/11 Posts: 527	Thu 01/05/12 10:40 PM
Sweet with a hint of sadness... Truly beautiful. Really enjoyed reading it.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Thu 01/05/12 11:01 PM
Sweet with a hint of sadness... Truly beautiful. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you... It's a personal venture I had with a woman once.. I followed her like a shadow.. Watched her get her heart broken, time and time again.. Every time I mentioned she needed someone better.. Hinting.. Poking.. Basically stating.. She should try me.. She would just laugh.. and say.. "But you're my best friend!" Eventually... She moved away. Haven't talked/seen her in well over two years.

afriQueen22 Joined Tue 10/25/11 Posts: 527	Thu 01/05/12 11:12 PM
Sweet with a hint of sadness... Truly beautiful. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you... It's a personal venture I had with a woman once.. I followed her like a shadow.. Watched her get her heart broken, time and time again.. Every time I mentioned she needed someone better.. Hinting.. Poking.. Basically stating.. She should try me.. She would just laugh.. and say.. "But you're my best friend!" Eventually... She moved away. Haven't talked/seen her in well over two years. My cousin once told me that the worst feeling in the world is being inlove with someone who isn't inlove with you. You story reminds me of a song.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Thu 01/05/12 11:19 PM
Sweet with a hint of sadness... Truly beautiful. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you... It's a personal venture I had with a woman once.. I followed her like a shadow.. Watched her get her heart broken, time and time again.. Every time I mentioned she needed someone better.. Hinting.. Poking.. Basically stating.. She should try me.. She would just laugh.. and say.. "But you're my best friend!" Eventually... She moved away. Haven't talked/seen her in well over two years. My cousin once told me that the worst feeling in the world is being inlove with someone who isn't inlove with you. You story reminds me of a song. Well, she 'loved' me.. Just nowhere near the way I was aiming for. I agree entirely with your cousin though. ..what song? If I may inquire?

afriQueen22 Joined Tue 10/25/11 Posts: 527	Thu 01/05/12 11:36 PM
Sweet with a hint of sadness... Truly beautiful. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you... It's a personal venture I had with a woman once.. I followed her like a shadow.. Watched her get her heart broken, time and time again.. Every time I mentioned she needed someone better.. Hinting.. Poking.. Basically stating.. She should try me.. She would just laugh.. and say.. "But you're my best friend!" Eventually... She moved away. Haven't talked/seen her in well over two years. My cousin once told me that the worst feeling in the world is being inlove with someone who isn't inlove with you. You story reminds me of a song. Well, she 'loved' me.. Just nowhere near the way I was aiming for. I agree entirely with your cousin though. ..what song? If I may inquire? Ha ha well it's a very uhm, crude song. It's called, "How To Hate" by Lil Wayne.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Thu 01/05/12 11:47 PM
Sweet with a hint of sadness... Truly beautiful. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you... It's a personal venture I had with a woman once.. I followed her like a shadow.. Watched her get her heart broken, time and time again.. Every time I mentioned she needed someone better.. Hinting.. Poking.. Basically stating.. She should try me.. She would just laugh.. and say.. "But you're my best friend!" Eventually... She moved away. Haven't talked/seen her in well over two years. My cousin once told me that the worst feeling in the world is being inlove with someone who isn't inlove with you. You story reminds me of a song. Well, she 'loved' me.. Just nowhere near the way I was aiming for. I agree entirely with your cousin though. ..what song? If I may inquire? Ha ha well it's a very uhm, crude song. It's called, "How To Hate" by Lil Wayne. What the...? My poem reminds you of a rapper? o.o Oh do tell. This I gotta hear. :]