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mig25 · 2011-12-05T01:05:19-08:00

Forever The lights flickered. Breaths came and went. Death beckoned. The family gathered around. Tears fell. Goodbye.

Topic: Forever
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1544	Mon 12/05/11 01:05 AM
Forever The lights flickered. Breaths came and went. Death beckoned. The family gathered around. Tears fell. Goodbye.

joy4gud Joined Sun 06/05/11 Posts: 3172	Mon 12/05/11 01:09 AM
Wow! I almost miss that.. Nice write.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 12/05/11 01:22 PM
This said so much Mig.. My best friend got married last week, and tomorrow she will be burying her new husband, due to a car accident..

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 12/05/11 03:42 PM
This said so much Mig.. My best friend got married last week, and tomorrow she will be burying her new husband, due to a car accident.. so...no words for both of you.

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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 12/05/11 07:42 PM
Nice!!!!!!