Topic: Child in a Shell
BrokenKiwi's photo
Wed 11/30/11 05:32 PM
Child in a Shell

It’s dark this early in the morning breeze
A young child wanders where he shouldn’t be
Footsteps echo on the pavement street
The shuffling sounds of another’s feet

A familiar face so close to home
Beckons me in and then we’re alone
In the blink of an eye
In the grass laden frost
Threats found in whispers
Innocence lost

So much to hide in the mind of a child
Feelings of guilt are driving him wild
Father has stained the carpet in beer
Cigarette ash I smell everywhere

“Mother” I plead, but alas she can’t hear
The pill bottles empty, she hauntingly stares
“What a gifted young boy”
“A pity” they say
I learned how to hate on that very day

Taken away in such clinical style
Strained to remember my mother’s sweet smile
Dragged by my hair and slapped in the face
Seething inside with contemptuous disgrace

I prayed for mother or father to come
To bring me back home
To reclaim their son

I grew up in violence, sin and rejection
It taught me to fight and despise all affection
Like tainted illusions of trust, hope and love
Spoken by others and worn like a glove

In the mind of a man, in the dark hides a child
In a place that is cold, and really quite vile
The ground is like quicksand that’s holding him fast
Flashes like lightening reflecting his past

No one came to save him then, no ones coming still
Finding ways to keep on going
If even but by pill

The monster’s dark embrace is strong
There is no escape as such
And though the creature may be gone
I feel the monsters touch

Terri720's photo
Wed 11/30/11 05:53 PM
flowerforyou Very well written... I could totally relate to what you have written.

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Wed 11/30/11 05:55 PM
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Wed 11/30/11 06:00 PM

Child in a Shell

It’s dark this early in the morning breeze
A young child wanders where he shouldn’t be
Footsteps echo on the pavement street
The shuffling sounds of another’s feet

A familiar face so close to home
Beckons me in and then we’re alone
In the blink of an eye
In the grass laden frost
Threats found in whispers
Innocence lost

So much to hide in the mind of a child
Feelings of guilt are driving him wild
Father has stained the carpet in beer
Cigarette ash I smell everywhere

“Mother” I plead, but alas she can’t hear
The pill bottles empty, she hauntingly stares
“What a gifted young boy”
“A pity” they say
I learned how to hate on that very day

Taken away in such clinical style
Strained to remember my mother’s sweet smile
Dragged by my hair and slapped in the face
Seething inside with contemptuous disgrace

I prayed for mother or father to come
To bring me back home
To reclaim their son

I grew up in violence, sin and rejection
It taught me to fight and despise all affection
Like tainted illusions of trust, hope and love
Spoken by others and worn like a glove

In the mind of a man, in the dark hides a child
In a place that is cold, and really quite vile
The ground is like quicksand that’s holding him fast
Flashes like lightening reflecting his past

No one came to save him then, no ones coming still
Finding ways to keep on going
If even but by pill

The monster’s dark embrace is strong
There is no escape as such
And though the creature may be gone
I feel the monsters touch



(((((:heart: )))))

Be still my heart....flowerforyou

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Wed 11/30/11 06:08 PM
Many a munster live within us all.
Some are like a tiny ant,
and others ten feet tall.
This reminds me of many who live in this pain.
Wanting love, yet tasting acid rain.

A very COOL and deeply enriched write man..:cry:

RainbowTrout's photo
Thu 12/01/11 01:06 PM
I really enjoying reading your poems.

kc0003's photo
Thu 12/01/11 03:08 PM
drinker

BrokenKiwi's photo
Thu 12/01/11 06:58 PM

flowerforyou Very well written... I could totally relate to what you have written.
Thanks :)

BrokenKiwi's photo
Thu 12/01/11 06:59 PM


Child in a Shell

It’s dark this early in the morning breeze
A young child wanders where he shouldn’t be
Footsteps echo on the pavement street
The shuffling sounds of another’s feet

A familiar face so close to home
Beckons me in and then we’re alone
In the blink of an eye
In the grass laden frost
Threats found in whispers
Innocence lost

So much to hide in the mind of a child
Feelings of guilt are driving him wild
Father has stained the carpet in beer
Cigarette ash I smell everywhere

“Mother” I plead, but alas she can’t hear
The pill bottles empty, she hauntingly stares
“What a gifted young boy”
“A pity” they say
I learned how to hate on that very day

Taken away in such clinical style
Strained to remember my mother’s sweet smile
Dragged by my hair and slapped in the face
Seething inside with contemptuous disgrace

I prayed for mother or father to come
To bring me back home
To reclaim their son

I grew up in violence, sin and rejection
It taught me to fight and despise all affection
Like tainted illusions of trust, hope and love
Spoken by others and worn like a glove

In the mind of a man, in the dark hides a child
In a place that is cold, and really quite vile
The ground is like quicksand that’s holding him fast
Flashes like lightening reflecting his past

No one came to save him then, no ones coming still
Finding ways to keep on going
If even but by pill

The monster’s dark embrace is strong
There is no escape as such
And though the creature may be gone
I feel the monsters touch



(((((:heart: )))))

Be still my heart....flowerforyou
Glad you liked it ;)

BrokenKiwi's photo
Thu 12/01/11 07:00 PM

Many a munster live within us all.
Some are like a tiny ant,
and others ten feet tall.
This reminds me of many who live in this pain.
Wanting love, yet tasting acid rain.

A very COOL and deeply enriched write man..:cry:
Thank you very much :)

BrokenKiwi's photo
Thu 12/01/11 07:02 PM

I really enjoying reading your poems.
Thanks I am glad that you do, I will post more soon :)