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BrokenKiwi
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Tue 11/22/11 01:12 PM
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I thought I might take advantage of this forum and post some of my poems. I have written MY own poems for awhile now and they help me to put into writing feelings and stories about the ups and downs of life, mostly downs for me as my childhood was a bit of a disaster, actually my life whole hasn't been great BUT it does make for great poetry I think! These poems are all 100% mine.
Here is the first I will share and if there is any interest I may add others. Thanks for reading. Twilight of Shadows In the twilight of shadows Where storm clouds abound In the dusk of my mind Where no hope is found A rain swept cemetery Deep in my soul A breeze of insanity Whistled and rolled In the furthest corner Of darkest despair I come face to face With all that I fear Tombstones like strangers Brokenly stare Engraved with those memories I scarcely can bear Hills shaped like monsters, I shudder to look From behind they hide creatures My childhood they took Branches of trees twisted in pain They creak and they moan And they scream out my name Shivers like spiders They crawl down my spine I shake just a little I’m lost in my mind |
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Hey. Great write. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you :)
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I can remember when I switched from writing in my journal to doing a journal of poetry. Shadows are cool to write about. Here is one of mine.
Shadow Strangers It is quiet as I walk down the hall. I know he is there behind that wall. He will want me at his becon call. I tell myself that he is just small. He starts yelling; Not new at all. He must be thinking he's at a mall. I must get to him before he falls. Nervous laughter then the brawl. Again comes the southern draw. I have to stay calm and withdraw. I can't let this be the last straw. Slowly my composure will thaw. Shadow strangers but so raw. |
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Grt peotry, i had 2 read it the second time 2 realy understand it.very brilant way of puttin it.
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Very cool write kiwi,,,and much depth to detail,,I liked it much..
welcome here to the poetic circle of ink spots....  
And a nice add rainbow...also cool,,, 
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welcome...
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I thought I might take advantage of this forum and post some of my poems. I have written MY own poems for awhile now and they help me to put into writing feelings and stories about the ups and downs of life, mostly downs for me as my childhood was a bit of a disaster, actually my life whole hasn't been great BUT it does make for great poetry I think! These poems are all 100% mine. Here is the first I will share and if there is any interest I may add others. Thanks for reading. Twilight of Shadows In the twilight of shadows Where storm clouds abound In the dusk of my mind Where no hope is found A rain swept cemetery Deep in my soul A breeze of insanity Whistled and rolled In the furthest corner Of darkest despair I come face to face With all that I fear Tombstones like strangers Brokenly stare Engraved with those memories I scarcely can bear Hills shaped like monsters, I shudder to look From behind they hide creatures My childhood they took Branches of trees twisted in pain They creak and they moan And they scream out my name Shivers like spiders They crawl down my spine I shake just a little I’m lost in my mind  Great use of metaphor...haunting memories....Will look forward to more!
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I thought I might take advantage of this forum and post some of my poems. I have written MY own poems for awhile now and they help me to put into writing feelings and stories about the ups and downs of life, mostly downs for me as my childhood was a bit of a disaster, actually my life whole hasn't been great BUT it does make for great poetry I think! These poems are all 100% mine. Here is the first I will share and if there is any interest I may add others. Thanks for reading. Twilight of Shadows In the twilight of shadows Where storm clouds abound In the dusk of my mind Where no hope is found A rain swept cemetery Deep in my soul A breeze of insanity Whistled and rolled In the furthest corner Of darkest despair I come face to face With all that I fear Tombstones like strangers Brokenly stare Engraved with those memories I scarcely can bear Hills shaped like monsters, I shudder to look From behind they hide creatures My childhood they took Branches of trees twisted in pain They creak and they moan And they scream out my name Shivers like spiders They crawl down my spine I shake just a little I’m lost in my mind Very Nice 
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I can remember when I switched from writing in my journal to doing a journal of poetry. Shadows are cool to write about. Here is one of mine.
Shadow Strangers It is quiet as I walk down the hall. I know he is there behind that wall. He will want me at his becon call. I tell myself that he is just small. He starts yelling; Not new at all. He must be thinking he's at a mall. I must get to him before he falls. Nervous laughter then the brawl. Again comes the southern draw. I have to stay calm and withdraw. I can't let this be the last straw. Slowly my composure will thaw. Shadow strangers but so raw. I truly enjoy everything you Share 
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I can remember when I switched from writing in my journal to doing a journal of poetry. Shadows are cool to write about. Here is one of mine.
Shadow Strangers It is quiet as I walk down the hall. I know he is there behind that wall. He will want me at his becon call. I tell myself that he is just small. He starts yelling; Not new at all. He must be thinking he's at a mall. I must get to him before he falls. Nervous laughter then the brawl. Again comes the southern draw. I have to stay calm and withdraw. I can't let this be the last straw. Slowly my composure will thaw. Shadow strangers but so raw. |
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Grt peotry, i had 2 read it the second time 2 realy understand it.very brilant way of puttin it. |
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I thought I might take advantage of this forum and post some of my poems. I have written MY own poems for awhile now and they help me to put into writing feelings and stories about the ups and downs of life, mostly downs for me as my childhood was a bit of a disaster, actually my life whole hasn't been great BUT it does make for great poetry I think! These poems are all 100% mine. Here is the first I will share and if there is any interest I may add others. Thanks for reading. Twilight of Shadows In the twilight of shadows Where storm clouds abound In the dusk of my mind Where no hope is found A rain swept cemetery Deep in my soul A breeze of insanity Whistled and rolled In the furthest corner Of darkest despair I come face to face With all that I fear Tombstones like strangers Brokenly stare Engraved with those memories I scarcely can bear Hills shaped like monsters, I shudder to look From behind they hide creatures My childhood they took Branches of trees twisted in pain They creak and they moan And they scream out my name Shivers like spiders They crawl down my spine I shake just a little I’m lost in my mind Great use of metaphor...haunting memories....Will look forward to more!
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Well I thought I would share another poem... But wasn't sure whether to place as a new thread or here?
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Nice write mate..Welcome to Mingle..
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Thank you very much :)
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Welcome, great poem...look forard to more.
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Well I thought I would share another poem... But wasn't sure whether to place as a new thread or here? To post a new topic or not to post a new topic. That is the question.
Welcome to mingle2 where we are pretty flexible (for the most part).
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I thought I might take advantage of this forum and post some of my poems. I have written MY own poems for awhile now and they help me to put into writing feelings and stories about the ups and downs of life, mostly downs for me as my childhood was a bit of a disaster, actually my life whole hasn't been great BUT it does make for great poetry I think! These poems are all 100% mine. Here is the first I will share and if there is any interest I may add others. Thanks for reading. Twilight of Shadows In the twilight of shadows Where storm clouds abound In the dusk of my mind Where no hope is found A rain swept cemetery Deep in my soul A breeze of insanity Whistled and rolled In the furthest corner Of darkest despair I come face to face With all that I fear Tombstones like strangers Brokenly stare Engraved with those memories I scarcely can bear Hills shaped like monsters, I shudder to look From behind they hide creatures My childhood they took Branches of trees twisted in pain They creak and they moan And they scream out my name Shivers like spiders They crawl down my spine I shake just a little I’m lost in my mind I do like this one :) |
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