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The gods have spoiled the earth, soured the grapes and filled the flask with the pungent contents of exasperated love. My heart sleeps with the sadness of deaths cold door: like a lone Saguaro standing at the deserts edge, waiting for a drop of rain, a storm, a flood. Love stands before me taunting me, mocking me! Its left its mark, left its deep purple coagulated stain upon my once open and bright heart. Oh to bury the yesterdays which hold me in such profound divide. Oh to walk once more the walk of duel shadows: the walk of careless fortune. The sea calls home each wave it sends to dispense its salt on the lifeless sand of the shore, the tide rushing my cheek, salting my lips, my words, my wounds. Love stands before me, a sinister dove with a vulture’s talons, out of place, like the single hoof-print I have planted in the sand. The moon hangs in the blood-blackened sky, reflecting in a sad mirror that has seen its better days. kc '11 |
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Captivating and beautiful write kc..
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Alas, what was once born fresh and new,,,returns, dead and missing.
Nice write my friend,,,a love, so faint,,,,,,,,, ![]() |
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thanks kids!
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Tue 11/22/11 02:39 AM
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![]() A heart is like a glass of wine. (full,empty, or broken) Excellent write.....haunting. ![]() ![]() . |
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![]() A heart is like a glass of wine. (full,empty, or broken) Excellent write.....haunting. ![]() ![]() . thank you for seeing into it and for once again taking the time... ![]() |
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A banquet of rare meat.
Delicious with salt. ![]() ![]() Walk at nighttime and enjoy Where the shadows all meld The lovers and the dead and gone Hand in hand all swirled together Dance in sand among the Saguro And twisted barrels No spines can tear our shadow Selves entwined under a sunless Canopy of peace Along the dry washes and The Salt River At the edge of Taliesin West |
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Excellent poem, powerful and well written :)
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A banquet of rare meat. Delicious with salt. ![]() ![]() Walk at nighttime and enjoy Where the shadows all meld The lovers and the dead and gone Hand in hand all swirled together Dance in sand among the Saguro And twisted barrels No spines can tear our shadow Selves entwined under a sunless Canopy of peace Along the dry washes and The Salt River At the edge of Taliesin West s1ow...thank you, for both. ![]() |
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Excellent poem, powerful and well written :) bk...i appreciate that. ![]() |
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The gods have spoiled the earth, soured the grapes and filled the flask with the pungent contents of exasperated love. My heart sleeps with the sadness of deaths cold door: like a lone Saguaro standing at the deserts edge, waiting for a drop of rain, a storm, a flood. Love stands before me taunting me, mocking me! Its left its mark, left its deep purple coagulated stain upon my once open and bright heart. Oh to bury the yesterdays which hold me in such profound divide. Oh to walk once more the walk of duel shadows: the walk of careless fortune. The sea calls home each wave it sends to dispense its salt on the lifeless sand of the shore, the tide rushing my cheek, salting my lips, my words, my wounds. Love stands before me, a sinister dove with a vulture’s talons, out of place, like the single hoof-print I have planted in the sand. The moon hangs in the blood-blackened sky, reflecting in a sad mirror that has seen its better days. kc '11 Wow... awesome write. I love to read the words of a cynic who fights themselves. I wish for you... love. Beauty upon beauty. |
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Teditis:
haha, thank you for taking the time...a cynic I am, no doubt! but it takes a certain familiarity to spot it. (no offence) |
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Edited by
Teditis
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Mon 11/28/11 03:47 PM
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No offence at all... I figured the same, see.
If figured that you'd see it clearly... so no offence was really meant to begin with... Light-hearted cynics, we. But we still Love, no? Real love... It shows in your writings... which are growing by the day. "If you prick us, do we not still bleed...?" and so forth and so on. "Oh to bury the yesterdays which hold me in such profound divide. Oh to walk once more the walk of duel shadows: the walk of careless fortune." Awesome... and I bleed. ![]() ![]() |
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yes, we still love and yes we bleed.
never hampered by our cynicism, all things in moderation! |
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And bleed we shall. I believe, though, it is more in what you are not saying where the power lies. Enjoyed, so very.
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