Topic: Walking Alone
kc0003's photo
Mon 11/21/11 03:42 PM

The gods have spoiled the earth,
soured the grapes and filled the flask with the
pungent contents of exasperated love.
My heart sleeps with the sadness of deaths cold door:
like a lone Saguaro standing at the deserts edge,
waiting for a drop of rain, a storm, a flood.

Love stands before me taunting me, mocking me!
Its left its mark, left its deep purple coagulated stain upon my once
open and bright heart.
Oh to bury the yesterdays which hold me in such profound divide.
Oh to walk once more the walk of duel shadows:
the walk of careless fortune.

The sea calls home each wave it sends to dispense its salt on the
lifeless sand of the shore, the tide rushing my cheek, salting my lips,
my words, my wounds.
Love stands before me, a sinister dove with a vulture’s talons, out of place,
like the single hoof-print I have planted in the sand.
The moon hangs in the blood-blackened sky,
reflecting in a sad mirror that has seen its better days.


kc '11

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Mon 11/21/11 05:31 PM
Captivating and beautiful write kc..

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Mon 11/21/11 05:36 PM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: drinker

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Mon 11/21/11 05:40 PM
Alas, what was once born fresh and new,,,returns, dead and missing.

Nice write my friend,,,a love, so faint,,,,,,,,,drinker

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/21/11 10:51 PM
thanks kids! laugh

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Tue 11/22/11 02:27 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Tue 11/22/11 02:39 AM

A heart is like a glass of wine. (full,empty, or broken)


Excellent write.....haunting.smokin flowerforyou



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kc0003's photo
Tue 11/22/11 10:06 PM


A heart is like a glass of wine. (full,empty, or broken)

Excellent write.....haunting.smokin flowerforyou
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thank you for seeing into it and for once again taking the time...drinker

s1owhand's photo
Tue 11/22/11 11:21 PM
A banquet of rare meat.
Delicious
with salt.

bigsmile

drinker

Walk at nighttime and enjoy
Where the shadows all meld
The lovers and the dead and gone
Hand in hand all swirled together
Dance in sand among the Saguro
And twisted barrels
No spines can tear our shadow
Selves entwined under a sunless
Canopy of peace
Along the dry washes and
The Salt River
At the edge of Taliesin West


BrokenKiwi's photo
Wed 11/23/11 12:54 AM
Excellent poem, powerful and well written :)

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:25 PM

A banquet of rare meat.
Delicious
with salt.

bigsmile

drinker

Walk at nighttime and enjoy
Where the shadows all meld
The lovers and the dead and gone
Hand in hand all swirled together
Dance in sand among the Saguro
And twisted barrels
No spines can tear our shadow
Selves entwined under a sunless
Canopy of peace
Along the dry washes and
The Salt River
At the edge of Taliesin West




s1ow...thank you, for both. drinker

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:26 PM

Excellent poem, powerful and well written :)


bk...i appreciate that. drinker

Teditis's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:30 PM


The gods have spoiled the earth,
soured the grapes and filled the flask with the
pungent contents of exasperated love.
My heart sleeps with the sadness of deaths cold door:
like a lone Saguaro standing at the deserts edge,
waiting for a drop of rain, a storm, a flood.

Love stands before me taunting me, mocking me!
Its left its mark, left its deep purple coagulated stain upon my once
open and bright heart.
Oh to bury the yesterdays which hold me in such profound divide.
Oh to walk once more the walk of duel shadows:
the walk of careless fortune.

The sea calls home each wave it sends to dispense its salt on the
lifeless sand of the shore, the tide rushing my cheek, salting my lips,
my words, my wounds.
Love stands before me, a sinister dove with a vulture’s talons, out of place,
like the single hoof-print I have planted in the sand.
The moon hangs in the blood-blackened sky,
reflecting in a sad mirror that has seen its better days.


kc '11

Wow... awesome write.
I love to read the words of a cynic who fights themselves.
I wish for you... love.
Beauty upon beauty.

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:39 PM
Teditis:

haha, thank you for taking the time...a cynic I am, no doubt!
but it takes a certain familiarity to spot it. (no offence)

Teditis's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:46 PM
Edited by Teditis on Mon 11/28/11 03:47 PM
No offence at all... I figured the same, see.
If figured that you'd see it clearly... so no offence was really meant to begin with...

Light-hearted cynics, we.
But we still Love, no? Real love...
It shows in your writings... which are growing by the day.

"If you prick us, do we not still bleed...?" and so forth and so on.

"Oh to bury the yesterdays which hold me in such profound divide.
Oh to walk once more the walk of duel shadows:
the walk of careless fortune."

Awesome... and I bleed.flowerforyou drinker


kc0003's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:53 PM
yes, we still love and yes we bleed.
never hampered by our cynicism, all things in moderation!

Sharris's photo
Mon 11/28/11 04:41 PM
And bleed we shall. I believe, though, it is more in what you are not saying where the power lies. Enjoyed, so very.