Topic: Fragile
andr3y's photo
Wed 11/02/11 07:06 PM
This poem is brought to you by a guy who was waiting in line at 7am at school! =D ...enjoy!


She moves like a metaphor

With a smile that I would love to adore

A smooth temptation

What an incantation

That brings forth a stirring sensation



Sought by vultures who know no better

A fragility that could undeservingly wither

Though no fortune favors the considered

Left to gaze at such a wondrous figure



She`s poetry in motion

That ceases to deliver.

thewaterbearer's photo
Wed 11/02/11 07:23 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Wed 11/02/11 07:30 PM
Edited by Up2Us on Wed 11/02/11 08:09 PM



Awesome write.....smooth flow & nice play on words.... smokin drinker



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Sharris's photo
Thu 11/03/11 05:15 AM
Welcome
enjoyable metaphors.

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Thu 11/03/11 07:15 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Thu 11/03/11 05:52 PM
Nice write and welcome..waving

andr3y's photo
Sun 11/06/11 09:53 PM
thanks everyone! =) i do write through wordplay and music =)