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This poem is brought to you by a guy who was waiting in line at 7am at school! =D ...enjoy!
She moves like a metaphor With a smile that I would love to adore A smooth temptation What an incantation That brings forth a stirring sensation Sought by vultures who know no better A fragility that could undeservingly wither Though no fortune favors the considered Left to gaze at such a wondrous figure She`s poetry in motion That ceases to deliver. |
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Wed 11/02/11 08:09 PM
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![]() Awesome write.....smooth flow & nice play on words.... ![]() ![]() . |
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Welcome
enjoyable metaphors. |
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Nice write and welcome..
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thanks everyone! =) i do write through wordplay and music =)
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