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Topic: ~dominatrix
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 10/15/11 10:41 AM
i looked up the definiton- dominatrix it could be you a toxic steamroller- spewing malice you can't understand- why people fade away you were- mean- made me cry i forgive you- friend you say i'm no angel- i agree- go to hell (a venting...)

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 10/15/11 10:51 AM


soufiehere Joined Sat 10/24/09 Posts: 45430	Sat 10/15/11 10:52 AM
Sweet :-)

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 10/15/11 11:22 AM
Oh my....

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Sat 10/15/11 02:06 PM
I really like this. Terrific ending. The feel of the piece definitely fits the title. Beautiful.

Localgirl_032003 Joined Sat 09/24/11 Posts: 31	Sat 10/15/11 02:22 PM
Nice

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 10/15/11 02:32 PM
Loved your vent TB..

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Mon 10/17/11 06:56 PM
"go to hell"

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 10/18/11 09:23 AM
tazztops...i still get a hug?... soufiehere...i thought so too... Up2Us... plastic_pancakes...real life stuff...goodtoseeyou. Localgirl...thankyou... Ainjel...me too. manOffewwords...kinda shocking ain't it?... teasingbrunette

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 10/18/11 11:39 AM
Strongly expressed, perfect ending.

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 02/02/12 11:52 AM
Wow... that would take a few pots o'coffee and a full night to understand. Beautifully expressed though.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 02/02/12 11:58 AM
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 02/02/12 12:46 PM
Teditis...you've been digging..smile. 2KidsMom...thankyou for reading... teasingbrunette

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 02/02/12 12:57 PM
Teditis...you've been digging..smile. 2KidsMom...thankyou for reading... teasingbrunette too much much perhaps...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 02/02/12 01:00 PM
....it was a venting write for me...rarely do i tell someone to go to he--... you dig away,.mister..

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 02/02/12 01:03 PM Edited by 2KidsMom on Thu 02/02/12 01:03 PM
....it was a venting write for me...rarely do i tell someone to go to he--... you dig away,.mister.. I always love to read your stuff..I am sorry for whomever hurt you. I hope the venting made you feel better.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 02/02/12 01:10 PM
ya..that and the go to he-- part...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 02/02/12 01:11 PM Edited by Teditis on Thu 02/02/12 01:12 PM
....it was a venting write for me...rarely do i tell someone to go to he--... you dig away,.mister.. Venting is a good thing sometimes... in fact I enjoy watching peeps let frustration have it's way with them for just a while... hoping always that they allow the pendulum of reason balance things out... So thanks for venting in front of us all... shows strength of character, imho. Dig away, huh? Sweet invite... but I seem scare folks away with that. I like what we have, and would want to ruin it... you write, I'll read. Otherwise peeps may talk, haha. -much love. -t

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 02/02/12 01:16 PM
funny guy you...that's a compliment. sometimes not easy to show the not so pretty side of yourself...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 02/02/12 01:51 PM
funny guy you...that's a compliment. sometimes not easy to show the not so pretty side of yourself... Aye... I'm actually getting quite bored with it. (showing the "not so pretty side" of myself... like a disclaimer on an infomercial about drugs, haha) And yeah... I felt it as a compliment. Can I ask a favor... since I have to come up with name for you that doesn't infer a communicable disease? Write me a poem dearest... haha.