Topic: Consumed
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Fri 09/09/11 12:29 AM
Consumed


I am here
I am alone

I am
devoted
to wounds
long since healed
by the sweet surrender of time
lingering
in habits
and hopes
with the concession
that I will always be
a meek breath
waiting

I am here
I am alone

I am
consumed
by haunting memories
lingering
within them
as if they could provide
one last moment
to escape the reality of now
yet
time remains as still
as my bated breath

I am here
because I cannot
move forward
and I am alone
because I continue
to wait
and I wait
because I still love you


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Fri 09/09/11 01:21 AM
Really nice write Mig..drinker

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Fri 09/09/11 04:50 AM
Nice write.....smokin

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Fri 09/09/11 12:38 PM
drinker drinker drinker

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Sat 09/10/11 10:04 AM
I am here because I cannot stop reading your next writes...
I am consumed in this place you take me,,for my eyes are open wide.

:wink: drinker :banana: :banana: NICE POEM, my friend....

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Sat 09/10/11 10:35 AM
Very nice. flowerforyou flowerforyou drinker

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Sat 09/10/11 11:11 PM
...ohwell

kc0003's photo
Sat 09/10/11 11:18 PM
mig...drinker