Topic: not enough
d4tc's photo
Sun 08/21/11 11:46 AM

already you can tell the word 'satisfied' should not be applied

both shoes tied together, climbing a mountain of forever

making what is difficult involves trifling meausures

as the headless could careless about being clever

when severed.



when you don't know how to reply it is easy to say

'whatever' you can when you don't give a damn

about how your body feels about getting a farmers tan

you see you believe you would take me more serious

if this was written with a pen as opposed to a crayon.



on whatever hand there is no satisfaction when you

constantly look in the mirror and fear no attraction

and every clear thought becomes curved by an obscure

view of you to create an uncomfortable distraction

'that' can only leave your hands pissed because their

wrists are cuffed.



look around the edges and you will see these soft hands

could be rough. where i am good at using the hate i have

for myself covered up by those of whom i express my love

which all in all 'means' whatever we do we will always know

that one more breathe before our final rest would at best be

not enough


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kc0003's photo
Sun 08/21/11 11:53 AM
drinker

Sharris's photo
Sun 08/21/11 11:57 AM
Love your word study...

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Sun 08/21/11 12:02 PM
smokin drinker

winterblue56's photo
Sun 08/21/11 07:14 PM
happy

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Sun 08/21/11 07:32 PM
Massive.. drinker

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Mon 08/22/11 06:26 AM
drinker flowers

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 08/22/11 01:41 PM
One more day is all we ever ask for and then it is never enoughflowerforyou

RhonLynn's photo
Mon 08/22/11 05:53 PM
Very Nice D flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Mon 08/22/11 08:48 PM
thank you

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LesDH's photo
Mon 08/22/11 11:32 PM
deep, very deep! Had to read this one twice. Made me think a bit. Nice write, thanks for sharing.smokin

d4tc's photo
Tue 08/23/11 06:42 PM
Thanks Les!