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Edited by
mig25
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Thu 08/04/11 10:44 PM
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The First Step
The pain of the first step is the loneliest part of being alive not sure which foot to put forward or why I even need to try We had a lifetime to share to laugh to cry and I’m still crying The hardest part about taking the first step is not knowing where you’re going somewhere someplace that we shared or somewhere or someplace far from where memories exist Please, God, tell me how do I take that first step when all I think about is that we were the miracle of growing up together childhood sweethearts lovers parents friends grandparents soul mates Lord this hurts I close my eyes too but all I do is cry because time is inevitable but love is eternal Lord this hurts so much This poem was inspired by the song Angel by John Stoddart; I truly hope that i did it justice. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvwbUOXhY-M |
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Excellent write & soul searching song.........
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I believe you. Very sweet write...
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i'm glad the song inspired your words, but truly, your words can stand all on their own in their beauty.
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