The Rise of Light


It was an explosion
of beauty
that took the world by surprise
unsettling the night with violent rays
of warmth
that seemed to
stretch as far
as the eye could see

Its golden light
perfectly encased the world
in a brilliant storm of radiance
and renewed hope
as the orchestra
of morning chirps
awakened sleeping souls

The rise of light stretched limbs
and scattered dreams
while breathtakingly filtering
yesterday’s tribulations
through time’s soul

The world has a new day

Mig, this is one of those writes you wish would never end..You describe the birth of a new day beautifully..

Wonderful! Love the pacing and imagery!

Keep that wordsmithing flowing!


FantasyArtMan

This I feel and understand as it opens within me. Beautiful descriptions that grow as you read. More is hoped for and encouraging for a new day.

Very SWEET man,,in its read,,and a very open eye to have made this seen....

love the morning, each day grants a do over, make it the best!

You know Ainjel, when I was writing this my first thought was to see if someone else with a totally different writing style would either finish it or add to it for someone else to finish it. I'm still hoping someone will . . . it's like a new day with another perspective.

well, how about a new day... from a beach perspective?


6:28am eastern time
horizon blinks its sleepy eyes
faintest hues of pinks and yellows
breath of morning yawns

grains of sand
turn golden, bask in warm delight
awaiting footprints at waves crest
ocean's tapestry of dawn

((i'll never turn down a writing invitation!))

Silent morning amassed in fog
brings fresh smells of churned grass
mist tipped in fields of
faded green

Quarter moon luminesces each
swirl of smoke-like plumes
as it layers upon the
fertile land

Feathered friends shrill their
morning calls to all who roam
and wander in the darkness of
a new day

Stars retract as light breaks
through the misted dawn bringing to
life all that hibernates through
the night

Sleeping senses awaken breathing
in unison with the universe knowing
today carries for all a
new beginning...

Wow Ainjel and bastet126, I'm inspired!!! Isn't it a wonderful thing to say the same exact thing yet with a very distinct way?


The silent rise
of the distant whisper
was like a heartbeat
waiting for inspiration

Mist began to fade
as the whisper grew
louder and louder
until it awakened the world
with its warmth

One by one
heaven’s gift to the night
fade into outstretched rays
of golden beauty
as each drop of morning dew
captures the sun’s soul

Breathless