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| Topic: Goodbyes,,,,are NOT ALWAYS "GOOD" | |
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 I think we all just think life goes on. hell we may have a rotten life, but we're not gone. Then you get that news,,which tells you YOU LOSE! You have six months maybe, to be here, then,,that forever snooze. Like BYE,,DEAD,,GONE,,,no more words, no more going along. Just an end to all that was and could be,,A FINAL GOODBYE TO NOT SEE For everyone who knew you,,to all your family to live on through. this is the final hours for you to find them all, their love so true To be in this position,, to know your leaving, for them, not to have YOU.. For all of you who now have this a part of your life.. Be that it is your life or family or friend... LET THEM SEE YOU AGAIN,,AND KNOW YOUR LOVE FOR THEM! Because when THEIR GONE,,,,your never have this chance again... |
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Hmmmmm. So true!
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Indeed so very true. Nice
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Edited by
Teditis
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Wed 07/13/11 03:28 PM
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Nice write T,
 Truly lovely. But I don't think the love stops just because of a horizon... jmho. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1eR1ni6sZK4 |
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Edited by
Zimzane
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Wed 07/13/11 03:34 PM
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Very good. Might as well hang out here for awhile in the poem comunity.
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It's safer... lotsa heart here. haha.
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So THEN tell me somethun guys,,,,,
Do YOU,,,ever think that you may die,,,,before ever finding a lady who truly loves YOU? I know I HAVE contemplated THIS thought many times before,,,,lol as for a man who NEVER felt he'd live to see thirty,,,lol and having been on here for five years,,and going through many trials of finding,I have found MANY of the short falls that the Net can give you...like,,,,many who have FWB,,,and many who only TALK,but not really into long term, and then the acts,,who are not even who or what they say they are in life,,,lol So with all that,,,I guess NOW I just feel happy to have one show an interest in me,,,,  LIFE is AMAZING,,,and as ODD as in all that it holds for us to see....
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Life is amazing iam4u! Amazing is my favorite word...how can you top it? maybe all the others that didn't work out have led you to the appreciation you now have for the "one" you are talking with now...everything happens for a reason...or so they say. Congrats on the new grandbaby...every blessing to you and your family!
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Hell, I don't know T...
but you might be fishing in the wrong pond? All those people-types you listed seem to hang out here in droves... the Long-termers tend to run away screamin' Or crying.  What's this have to do with your writing...? Just wondering and am a little dense... what'd I miss? |
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This is awesome :)
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This is awesome :) I have to agree! Very well written!
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Nice buddy! Keep it up!
- Josh |
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Life is amazing iam4u! Amazing is my favorite word...how can you top it? maybe all the others that didn't work out have led you to the appreciation you now have for the "one" you are talking with now...everything happens for a reason...or so they say. Congrats on the new grandbaby...every blessing to you and your family!  
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Wonderful write, my friend
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Hell, I don't know T... but you might be fishing in the wrong pond? All those people-types you listed seem to hang out here in droves... the Long-termers tend to run away screamin' Or crying. What's this have to do with your writing...? Just wondering and am a little dense... what'd I miss? Just kidding.. well,,Zim came in and said THIS-->Very good. Might as well hang out here for awhile in the poem comunity. SO,,THATS why I thought we'd just shoot the poop in here for a bit,,as I asked THAT question.to him and you.as we were all on then. And how we feel,,and what we feel,,does most directly effect all my writing,,, its all that REAL LIFE stuff,,I feed from to FIND thoughts,,as in my questions I ask... And..I am having some health issues,,that effect my time here.  |
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This is awesome :) Your just way to nice,,,,
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it's not even knowing someone who may be leaving, that could be any of us, at any moment. my best friend lost her son and step son, tragically and much too young. it's making every day matter, not just when we know someone is leaving us. live, like you were dying.
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Edited by
Teditis
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Fri 07/15/11 12:21 PM
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Hell, I don't know T... but you might be fishing in the wrong pond? All those people-types you listed seem to hang out here in droves... the Long-termers tend to run away screamin' Or crying. What's this have to do with your writing...? Just wondering and am a little dense... what'd I miss? Just kidding.. well,,Zim came in and said THIS-->Very good. Might as well hang out here for awhile in the poem comunity. SO,,THATS why I thought we'd just shoot the poop in here for a bit,,as I asked THAT question.to him and you.as we were all on then. And how we feel,,and what we feel,,does most directly effect all my writing,,, its all that REAL LIFE stuff,,I feed from to FIND thoughts,,as in my questions I ask... And..I am having some health issues,,that effect my time here. ah... as I said... a bit dense, me. I hate steppin all ove peeps works with my points of view. I'll say if moved me... mebbe post a song that inspired similar thought/feelings. But never, ever considered shootin' the poop. Thanks for the offer! All your works seem to draw frome life and whether it's real or imagined... it oftens reminds of the realness of life. And this piece seems to deal directly to it... and have had occassion to think these thoughts, the ones we leave behind. But I'm one of those that thinks yadayada about afterlife. So when I went through that period... when I thought I was moving on... I remembered that, it was by mo means over. And I just don't sadness of that so much. Still, the ones left behind will grieve... and that is sad, no doubt. I guess we just can't carry their pain. idk. But I know by your other works... you encourage peeps to show love everyday. That's always important... whether you feel that you're living or dying. Honor and integrity... er that's what I see. But remember this is just poop I'm shootin, haha... Sorry to hear that your health ain't so good. Didn't know that...
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 Hell, I don't know T... but you might be fishing in the wrong pond? All those people-types you listed seem to hang out here in droves... the Long-termers tend to run away screamin' Or crying. What's this have to do with your writing...? Just wondering and am a little dense... what'd I miss? Just kidding.. well,,Zim came in and said THIS-->Very good. Might as well hang out here for awhile in the poem comunity. SO,,THATS why I thought we'd just shoot the poop in here for a bit,,as I asked THAT question.to him and you.as we were all on then. And how we feel,,and what we feel,,does most directly effect all my writing,,, its all that REAL LIFE stuff,,I feed from to FIND thoughts,,as in my questions I ask... And..I am having some health issues,,that effect my time here. ah... as I said... a bit dense, me. I hate steppin all ove peeps works with my points of view. I'll say if moved me... mebbe post a song that inspired similar thought/feelings. But never, ever considered shootin' the poop. Thanks for the offer! All your works seem to draw frome life and whether it's real or imagined... it oftens reminds of the realness of life. And this piece seems to deal directly to it... and have had occassion to think these thoughts, the ones we leave behind. But I'm one of those that thinks yadayada about afterlife. So when I went through that period... when I thought I was moving on... I remembered that, it was by mo means over. And I just don't sadness of that so much. Still, the ones left behind will grieve... and that is sad, no doubt. I guess we just can't carry their pain. idk. But I know by your other works... you encourage peeps to show love everyday. That's always important... whether you feel that you're living or dying. Honor and integrity... er that's what I see. But remember this is just poop I'm shootin, haha... Sorry to hear that your health ain't so good. Didn't know that...
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