Topic: Lines
Duck3017's photo
Sun 06/26/11 02:31 AM


Lines
 
I.
 
We play with the same lines. These
that were tossed into the world
like Pick Up Stix, 
stacking nets and racks
for the earth to impose its details.  
The world was meant to be seen in lines.
I have heard its challenge
and I accept.
 
II.
 
I am DNA in the cell of my car.
I drive on the freeway that has been waiting
for me. It's an isosceles triangle 
that spreads its legs, as I pass through 
the middle towards the apex.
 
III.
 
I sit in the reception area of the doctor’s office. 
There are lines here and I am happy. 
The lines of my chair ground me
to the outline of the room.
When receptionist calls my name,
I find the closest edge of the closest baseboard,
and follow its line along two walls 
and up the door frame to meet her eyes.
 
IV.
 
I wait in line at the pharmacy. It is straight
as it should be.  It connects me
like the dot of an ‘i’,
or a grass stain,
or a condom.
 
TAMMY is behind the counter,
all smiles and lip gloss.
Her customer service tag wears her body.
I can address her, as I connect
with her line angle name.
 
V.
 
The lines in my hallway 
are straight, like a plank. I walk 
its length.  At the end, toy trains
are parked on the bedroom floor in rows.
I know the game. 
I see the lines. 
I pick up the sticks.
 
 
 
 

Teditis's photo
Sun 06/26/11 07:57 AM
Wow... absolutely wow.
A lovely walk with you... thanks.
drinker

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Sun 06/26/11 08:28 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

bastet126's photo
Sun 06/26/11 09:42 AM
VI.

always a wonderful surprise from you
outside the lines

flowerforyou

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Sun 06/26/11 10:09 AM
Within the lines we stay controlled,
outside these lines we step,
Making all that truly defines.

Your lines cross our lines here,
Making us wonder,what YOU see there?

Nice write Mr Duck and keep on that straight and narrow,,,,,,,,_

Sharris's photo
Sun 06/26/11 10:10 AM
linear fusion

no photo
Sun 06/26/11 10:42 AM
Duck...An awesome write...drinker

Duck3017's photo
Mon 06/27/11 10:02 PM
Teditis - Thank you so much for your kind words
tazzops - I appreciate you dropping by
bastet126 - my flowers are in water, growing. Thank you
iam4u - I'm glad you enjoyed the lines
Sharris - I love the sound of that, linear fusion
Ainjel - I value your continued support

Thank you all again,

Duck!

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Mon 06/27/11 10:37 PM
That last line to walk,,to wait,,to just anticipate.

Shall the lines stay straight and true,

Or shall we break-free, into the light,, on through.spock

poppashroom's photo
Tue 06/28/11 02:22 PM
I followed you through your journey with a smile.
Thankyou

Duck3017's photo
Wed 06/29/11 10:23 PM
iam4u, I appreciate your continued support, thank you.
poppashroom, I'm glad you enjoyed the journey. Thanks for dropping by,

Duck!