Topic: Blue Eyes, Black Heart
blueyesblkhrt's photo
Thu 06/16/11 02:50 PM
Yet another tear falls from her empty blue eyes
No one cares that she sits alone here and cries
The darkness of pain lives deep within her soul
Inflicting pain on her heart is it's only goal
Sadness is just the very beginning of the fall
From high atop the cracked, dirty, and broken wall
That never truly keeps the hurt of love lost away
But lets the darkness in a little more every day
Holding on to the memories of love hurts so much
She knows within her heart her soul has lost touch
With the reality that brings to her the happiness
That her saddened mind will now always miss
So comes the death that turned her poor heart black
Love was all she wanted but it's what she will always lack.

bastet126's photo
Thu 06/16/11 03:37 PM
words flow from dark places, well done. flowerforyou and welcome!

Teditis's photo
Thu 06/16/11 03:38 PM
Very nice... reality is a hard task-master.
Hope that you keep writing.flowerforyou

blueyesblkhrt's photo
Thu 06/16/11 04:02 PM
blushing Thank you. I have many, many others that I will post sometime. happy

kc0003's photo
Thu 06/16/11 09:33 PM
welcome...flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 06/16/11 10:02 PM
Deep....smokin flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 06/16/11 10:23 PM
As dark as the night, loving as moon-light.
Your heart shall regain,as it loses it pain..

A very love loss poem for the heart to have cried.
So many users, so many have lied.

Glad to see you here,,and we hope you keep on writing there..

Welcome to your new found freedoms to express...:heart: flowerforyou drinker :wink: :wink: :banana:

Very Nice first write girl....:smile:

no photo
Thu 06/16/11 10:41 PM
Out of the darkness of my heart.
The seeds of your love took root, and flight.
The radiance of your soul, and inner light.
Became a refuge for my heart to heal inside.
What was once a dark desert of the soul.
Is a garden of love, where our love can grow.

Peace....smokinflowerforyou

blueyesblkhrt's photo
Fri 06/17/11 04:04 AM
Thank you all so very much
For all your beautiful words
I am truly touched
flowerforyou blushing

Sharris's photo
Fri 06/17/11 09:12 AM
this is filled with emotion, and expressed so carefully, like being on the edge of a tear...