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Yet another tear falls from her empty blue eyes
No one cares that she sits alone here and cries The darkness of pain lives deep within her soul Inflicting pain on her heart is it's only goal Sadness is just the very beginning of the fall From high atop the cracked, dirty, and broken wall That never truly keeps the hurt of love lost away But lets the darkness in a little more every day Holding on to the memories of love hurts so much She knows within her heart her soul has lost touch With the reality that brings to her the happiness That her saddened mind will now always miss So comes the death that turned her poor heart black Love was all she wanted but it's what she will always lack. |
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words flow from dark places, well done.
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Very nice... reality is a hard task-master.
Hope that you keep writing. ![]() |
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welcome...
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Deep....
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As dark as the night, loving as moon-light.
Your heart shall regain,as it loses it pain.. A very love loss poem for the heart to have cried. So many users, so many have lied. Glad to see you here,,and we hope you keep on writing there.. Welcome to your new found freedoms to express... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Very Nice first write girl.... ![]() |
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Out of the darkness of my heart.
The seeds of your love took root, and flight. The radiance of your soul, and inner light. Became a refuge for my heart to heal inside. What was once a dark desert of the soul. Is a garden of love, where our love can grow. Peace.... ![]() ![]() |
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Thank you all so very much
For all your beautiful words I am truly touched ![]() ![]() |
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this is filled with emotion, and expressed so carefully, like being on the edge of a tear...
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