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Topic: Somewhere out there.........
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 06/11/11 06:34 PM
I love the way you look, So many ways about you, I could write a book. To me your beautiful, honest and truthful. Its not at all what covers your outer shell. To me your heart is beautiful as well. I don't care how much money you have or make. YOUR the only icing, I need on my cake. Your smart, funny, sexy as hell when ya wanna play. Your wake-up smirk,,and crackly good morning is so cool and sweet. Baby,,its the all of YOU, that knocks me off my feet.. Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me...

mg1959 Joined Thu 04/05/07 Posts: 7872	Sat 06/11/11 06:49 PM
OK big guy, take me I'm all yours! take care bro

thewaterbearer Joined Sun 10/25/09 Posts: 19759	Sat 06/11/11 06:51 PM
Why thank you sweetheart I love the write, now can we makeout in your truck. Seriously I love the write, you are so good with words.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sat 06/11/11 08:21 PM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 06/11/11 08:51 PM


bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 06/11/11 09:12 PM
did someone say cake?? that was fun, enjoyed it very much!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 06/11/11 09:39 PM Edited by iam4u on Sat 06/11/11 09:41 PM
Why thank you sweetheart I love the write, now can we makeout in your truck. Seriously I love the write, you are so good with words. I just KNEW I would get some feed-back, from THAT poem,,, And NO,,THATS NOT WHAT MY TRUCK IS FOR,,, BUT,,,it is what it is,,, Thank you

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 06/11/11 09:40 PM Edited by iam4u on Sat 06/11/11 09:42 PM
did someone say cake?? that was fun, enjoyed it very much! YES,,YOU SAID,,Hey Terry,,let me make you a cake.. and I said,,,cool,,,I already have the perfect icing picked out Thanks,,

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 06/16/11 05:40 PM Edited by Teditis on Thu 06/16/11 05:41 PM
I love the way you look, So many ways about you, I could write a book. To me your beautiful, honest and truthful. Its not at all what covers your outer shell. To me your heart is beautiful as well. I don't care how much money you have or make. YOUR the only icing, I need on my cake. Your smart, funny, sexy as hell when ya wanna play. Your wake-up smirk,,and crackly good morning is so cool and sweet. Baby,,its the all of YOU, that knocks me off my feet.. Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... It's the simple things that matter most... always loved your focus on these things... you seem to do it with ease. haha, yeah, cake... that's cool too.

axl_rose40 Joined Mon 08/30/10 Posts: 868	Thu 06/16/11 06:12 PM
Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... Oh! how I wish it could be me unfortunately the sexy thing blows it all off Kidding aside, this is another one of your very good piece, Terry

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 06/16/11 06:54 PM
Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... Nice touch last line..... Very cool poem...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 06/16/11 07:16 PM
I love the way you look, So many ways about you, I could write a book. To me your beautiful, honest and truthful. Its not at all what covers your outer shell. To me your heart is beautiful as well. I don't care how much money you have or make. YOUR the only icing, I need on my cake. Your smart, funny, sexy as hell when ya wanna play. Your wake-up smirk,,and crackly good morning is so cool and sweet. Baby,,its the all of YOU, that knocks me off my feet.. Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... It's the simple things that matter most... always loved your focus on these things... you seem to do it with ease. haha, yeah, cake... that's cool too. Teditis,,your to kind man,,but thank you much for replying and the compliments...I TRY very hard to make a reader FEEL my heart,,and that which MAKES me draw from it... I hope you keep reading my words....

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 06/16/11 07:19 PM
Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... Oh! how I wish it could be me unfortunately the sexy thing blows it all off Kidding aside, this is another one of your very good piece, Terry Rose,,stop-it,,your sexy,,and you fit these words so THERE But your a gazillion miles away and THAT might be a problem,,, Thank you Rose for being so sweet,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 06/16/11 07:21 PM
Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... Nice touch last line..... Very cool poem... Up2u's,,your much better than I,,and I value your words,,Thanks for reading and for the glory man..

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 06/16/11 09:06 PM
Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... Nice touch last line..... Very cool poem... Up2u's,,your much better than I,,and I value your words,,Thanks for reading and for the glory man.. Thanks, but I simply let the poems write, and speak of themselves.... I really enjoy your work...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 06/16/11 09:23 PM
Now,,,,IF this might be YOU,,,,write me,,because this is me... Nice touch last line..... Very cool poem... Up2u's,,your much better than I,,and I value your words,,Thanks for reading and for the glory man.. Thanks, but I simply let the poems write, and speak of themselves.... I really enjoy your work... As I do yours as well man..We really have much in common,,and our hearts and our ways do follow close paths..lol I wished I had your tecnical skills with pic's and computers,,,lol,,I'd be like really seen as OUT-THERE,,with all my made-up expressions along with all my writes,,,,lol I'll be reading ya man,,and thanks again..