Topic: You Too? (for Bastet126)
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Tue 05/31/11 04:19 AM
Um,

Your glass is nearly empty,
My bottle's getting lonely,
Our tables are
Too big by far
For two.

We've both been watching couples
Come through the door in doubles
My hand is up;
I've been stood up.
You too?

Whatever were they thinking
That pair that left us drinking?
Do we not rate
A second date?
Well, you do.

Let me pull your chair out
And start our own affair out
Like friends who've gone,
Chose to move on
To step two.

Forget that brace, and savour
They were doing us a favour.

Is it just me, I fear,
Or is it getting hot in here...
... you, too?


bastet126's photo
Tue 05/31/11 05:19 AM
not even if i'd planned
to finally ditch the man
could i steal
a better deal
me too.

love it!! improv writing, now that is special! ty for indulging me.flowerforyou

soufiehere's photo
Tue 05/31/11 05:32 AM
Very nice, youz twoz.

Sharris's photo
Tue 05/31/11 06:52 AM

not even if i'd planned
to finally ditch the man
could i steal
a better deal
me too.

love it!! improv writing, now that is special! ty for indulging me.flowerforyou


onsie twosie threesie...score
why stop now..Shut the door!!!!

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Tue 05/31/11 07:49 AM
Nice. :)

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Wed 06/01/11 04:04 AM

not even if i'd planned
to finally ditch the man
could i steal
a better deal
me too.

love it!! improv writing, now that is special! ty for indulging me.flowerforyou



You're more than welcome. More wine, my dear? drinks

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Sun 10/02/11 08:01 AM
It's been a long time, I shouldn't have left you without a dope poem to step to.

How's everyone?

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Sun 10/02/11 09:29 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 10/02/11 09:02 PM
A tip-of the glass,,,showing this lady some class..
I liked this write,,for giving much light..
For the two of you,,as well as to a great night...drinks :smile:

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Mon 10/03/11 03:59 AM
Still up for the improv poetry, people - message me an idea and I'll see what pops up. :)