Topic: My Child~For Zanne46 and LAMom
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Mon 07/09/07 09:35 PM
much love and admiration to two women who gave over their richest treasures to us, we the people, to protect us and serve....

When I loved your father in passion and desire, I cried out with joy
When I learned that I was carrying my first born inside my body,
And that I would be fulfilled, complete, a mother,
I cried with exquisitely happy tears~

When I felt the butterfly flutter of my son, my life sprung child,
And the slightly stinging kick of infantile feet, anxious
To escape the warm womb of the woman who held him in such sweet captivity,
I laughed with pleasure~

When I was round fully bloomed with the joyful bundle I carried,
I felt contentment at the knowledge that you were on your way to
Lighten my life, despite the physical pangs of carrying a life,
I smiled once again~

When I gave birth to you, my baby, my son, with your laser light smile, and
Your bright sparked eyes, and heard your newborn cries,
And held you to my breast to watch you nuzzle for your first nourishment,
I cried with joy~

When you first walked, independent and away from me in your quest to
See what this oh so big world held for you, my arms ached for the baby you once were~
When I picked you up from your first fall, concerned and scared, I scolded,
And told you to be careful~

When your voice, your childlike tone changed and deepened to that of a young man,
I cried with the realization that you will never be my baby again,
When you first found passion, desire and joy, in a young star struck girl,
I worried~

When you made your first teenage decision, one so disagreeable with mine,
I was rudely shocked and awakened with the realization that my child,
Once small and dependent, looking to me thru wide scared eyes,
is a young man~

When you decided in your young man wisdom and life desire to serve a country so
Often ungrateful to those who fight for our rights and freedoms, I cried with the
Knowledge that you, a strong and independent man, set staunchly on the path of
Life that only you will walk, are still my love, my heart, my child.


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Mon 07/09/07 09:41 PM
Thank u Wiz fo sending this to Lamom...she deserves this poem to..and any other parent who has a child going in the military or has a child there already..

Thank u

All my love..

Talk tomorrow
Zanne

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Mon 07/09/07 09:45 PM
My Fair Wiz,, you have brought me to tears, Tears of joy for I am so proud to me a Mother,, My son Jermey has given me love, strength and so much wisdom in life and continues to remind me daily of what true Unconditional Love means,,, He is my light on the darkest night and my voice when I can not speak,, We have had our times of trouble yet have overcome all obstacles together,,, Recently he gave me the most precious gift known to man,, My Grandaughter Syanni,, When my son came to me and told me 3 years ago he wanted join the Military,, My first reply was why,, I dont want you to go,,, He stood tall and proud and pleaded his case for me,, Today I stand tall and am so proud of my son the Man he has become,,, My heart aches knowing he leaves soon,, I may not like the war Yet I will stand by my son and carry him with me everywhere I go,, and reasure him of the love and Respect I have for him and for the choices he has and continues to make in his young life...

You my friend are so amazing,, your grace and beauty flows in all you do,, Love you dearly Denise
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


God Bless our Men & Women,,, :heart:

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Mon 07/09/07 09:49 PM
Zanne, Mom...I dont agree with the war...but i admire hugely the men and women who are standing to fight my fight...our fight...they and their parents deserve all the respect and honor we can give them...they are fighting a fight in their beliefs and their desire to make this world a better place.....and you ladies, and all the fathers and mothers who stand by your children as they go off to fight this war are treasures to us as well....be proud...we're proud of you~

Thank you~
xoxooxoxoxoxox
Love,
Wiz

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Mon 07/09/07 09:55 PM
That brought tears to my eyes also.You and Jeremy and all who serve are in my prayers.:heart:

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Mon 07/09/07 10:08 PM
Thats a lovely thing to say to them pkh~~flowerforyou

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Tue 07/10/07 12:08 AM
That's a beautiful poem hon. It inspires.

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Tue 07/10/07 12:36 AM
flowerforyou Very touching.bigsmile

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Tue 07/10/07 02:47 AM
Bearifically beautiful once again MsWizard,and again I am in awe.U write and express yourself with tremendous emmotion & expression.U completely Rawk me & inspire me.I have felt that way from the moment I read ur work when U arrived here at our 2nd home{JSH}And this is for 2 very fine ladies.One is my gaurdian angel and the other I so look forward
to having as my friend.Your work is masterful and I am so glad that U are in are Poetry fold.I am humbled & flattered indeed.Your bearific friend forever & a day MsWizard.Totally awesome once again;fine fair lady poet.(((((((((bear~hugs~a plenty)))))))))))));=)+1X(cy blushing)
:smile: :tongue: flowerforyou :heart: blushing embarassed

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Tue 07/10/07 04:39 AM
Ms...

So beautifully written, thank you for sharing it with us. I cannot relate to the feelings of your son joining the forces. I can definately relate to the first feelings of motherhood, you captured everything I was feeling and just brought it back to me.

For that...I thank you.

-Joanne flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 07/10/07 08:11 AM
Thank you Sassy~I was inspired by the gifts of love these ladies and their son offer us so unquestioningly~flowerforyou

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Tue 07/10/07 08:11 AM
Pkh, your words are lovely~thank you!flowerforyou

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Tue 07/10/07 08:12 AM
Thank you Gryphyn~flowerforyou

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Tue 07/10/07 08:13 AM
Wizard hugs and many thanks to you for all your beautiful words and encouragement Cyber (((Cyberrrrrr)))))its a gift to have you as a new friend~flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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Tue 07/10/07 08:15 AM
Puffins thank you sweetie, it is not my son entering the military, it is Zanne and Mom's sons...but I do have a son, and I could only imagine how I would feel if he was leaving me to enter such a danger filled world such as that!flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 07/10/07 09:20 AM
You have found the perfect words to describe the first moments of motherhood, MsWizard. You have brought tears to my eyes. May God bless Zanne and Denise and their sons and keep them safe.

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Tue 07/10/07 09:55 AM
thank you summer....I have a son and it wasn't hard to write this one...he is my gift from life.....xoxoxoxoflowerforyou