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Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Mon 03/28/11 08:23 PM
hmmmm?

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 03/28/11 08:30 PM
if you are looking for fun, one should try to sound a little fun..... wouldn't you say? add some pizzazz, attract some fun! you can dooo eeet!! and welcome!

Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Mon 03/28/11 08:36 PM
umm okay lets get crazy and dance on peoples roofs and knock over trash cans?

Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Mon 03/28/11 08:40 PM
I must admit I AM NOT COOL like at all, I'm a very quiet personal but I do have my moments where I become very annoying but my heart is made of candy so theres that too

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 03/28/11 08:44 PM
so.... put some of that in your profile! and candy hearts are cool

Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Mon 03/28/11 08:48 PM
good idea thanks Bastet

Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Mon 03/28/11 08:56 PM
Okay there's a little more detail I think I did a good job idk

Troublebug Joined Sat 09/11/10 Posts: 10912	Mon 03/28/11 09:14 PM
YOu might try and add a picture that you can actually see your face a little better. You could add what kind of girl your interested in. and what you like to do in your spare time. Welcome to the mingle family!

freakyshiki2009 Joined Sun 02/27/11 Posts: 902	Wed 03/30/11 08:24 AM
The Shiki rates your profile a C. Here is why: 1. Too foofy. Man up!!! 2. You spend too much time talking about where you live, and not enough time about who you are.

Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Wed 03/30/11 12:32 PM
Sorry I'm not really manly

freakyshiki2009 Joined Sun 02/27/11 Posts: 902	Wed 03/30/11 12:43 PM
The Shiki can unfoof your profile.

dhska Joined Sun 08/22/10 Posts: 88	Wed 03/30/11 02:47 PM Edited by dhska on Wed 03/30/11 02:48 PM
I think you would benefit from talking more about your interests. Linking that or something about your personality to your headline would help too. One other thing I would say is talk about the type of person you are looking for. [Edit: as Troublebug said ...] Also, never apologise for who you are ;)

Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Wed 03/30/11 05:19 PM
all respect to The Shinki, but I don't think I'm interested

red_lace Joined Sat 04/17/10 Posts: 7247	Wed 03/30/11 05:40 PM Edited by red_lace on Wed 03/30/11 06:05 PM
Hi, Benjamania. Welcome to Mingle! Dhska got it right when he said you shouldn't apologize for who you are. Between his advice and Trouble's, I think they already covered everything you need to know to revise your profile. Have fun and join us in the forum. Carpe diem, quam minimum credula postero!

freakyshiki2009 Joined Sun 02/27/11 Posts: 902	Thu 03/31/11 09:50 AM
Although "foof" and "friend" both begin with the letter "f," they are not the same thing. A foofy profile says Stay Away.

Benjamania Joined Mon 03/28/11 Posts: 14	Thu 03/31/11 02:30 PM
Hmmm ok

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