Plz rate and comment

I would give you a 9.5/10

and I think you're a sweet girl =) I think I'd date you =)

looking like a doll.....nice smile but i will give u 9 out of 10.

I would spice up my profile a bit. Place your interests first. Be positive and patient. Cute smiles always win though. Pic is very pretty. I think you would be just fine. I would give you a 9 because you need to beef up your profile.

I have to give you a C-. Now, before you get all Genghis Khan on me, here is why.

1. You shirt has poor grammar. Kindly refrain from using the word "ain't."
2. You look all serious. You should smile more. You have nice yammies, so when you smile and laugh, that is a "win-win" situation for everyone.
3. You have one nice yammy pic, but that is of you far away.
4. Poor sentence structure. Here is what you write: "Interests: lyfe." I am sorry, but you should be able to spell the word "life."
5. What is 420 friendly? Does that mean you like cops? Are you part of the 5% Black Sisterhood? Does anyone know what that means? I sure don't.
6. "Profession: Military/dancer." Huh?

And so, I have to give this a C-. However, feel free to contact me for ways to improve this profile.

Shiki

Seems professional adviser,I liked this advice!!

Break it down Holms!

You're a dancer in the military or do both separately? Those are worth talking about, elaborate.


Redundant, since your age already posted. Cut it.


Fair enough.


Smarter then the average bear? Elaborate.


:| doesn't seem apparent. Your sense of humour doesn't really come across.


Already apparent, saying it just makes you sound inflated.


In what ways?


Cool, spark me up!


Good.

One more thing: smile!