Topic: Untitled #8
mig25's photo
Mon 02/28/11 02:43 AM
Ok, I was just writing with nothing particular in mind. This is what I ended up with . . . don't know why I'm posting it.

Untitled 8


I’ve dreamed of it for so long,
love,
its tenderness
and warmth
wrapped beautifully around me

I’ve dreamed of it for so long,
love,
reading stories about it
words capturing my thoughts
hopes
desires
almost as if I were the author
and each chapter defined me

I’ve dreamed of it so long,
love,
hearing its rhythm
in every song
lyric
and beat
until I sway, moving effortlessly
almost as if love was the musician
and the song was me

I’ve dreamed of it for so long,
love




Shizbe's photo
Thu 03/03/11 08:32 AM
Hey, not bad, very nicely written if I do say so myself

no photo
Thu 03/03/11 07:52 PM
drinker drinker

Loy822's photo
Thu 03/03/11 07:54 PM
I really like it drinks

heaven99's photo
Thu 03/03/11 08:53 PM
i enjoyed that ... very good