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Ok, I was just writing with nothing particular in mind. This is what I ended up with . . . don't know why I'm posting it.
Untitled 8 I’ve dreamed of it for so long, love, its tenderness and warmth wrapped beautifully around me I’ve dreamed of it for so long, love, reading stories about it words capturing my thoughts hopes desires almost as if I were the author and each chapter defined me I’ve dreamed of it so long, love, hearing its rhythm in every song lyric and beat until I sway, moving effortlessly almost as if love was the musician and the song was me I’ve dreamed of it for so long, love |
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Hey, not bad, very nicely written if I do say so myself
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I really like it
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i enjoyed that ... very good
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