Topic: Honestly
Sharris's photo
Fri 02/25/11 10:40 PM
In ways unrelenting,
tenacious for quench,
I desire you.
Touch is not close enough
in this center
of quiet.
Repose resists.

You are but a man,
you have said,
who has known more world
than you disclose.
Yet, you have found me.
A plain woman
of some complexities,
as simple as a kiss.
Incessant, insistent
this perception.
You.

SadieLu 2011

no photo
Fri 02/25/11 10:49 PM
A woman this world has yet discovered,,,,very nice Sharris.:heart:

Sharris's photo
Sat 02/26/11 06:54 AM

A woman this world has yet discovered,,,,very nice Sharris.:heart:

always kind, gracious with your heart.

winterblue56's photo
Sat 02/26/11 07:00 PM
Very nice Saddie happy

Sharris's photo
Sat 02/26/11 07:29 PM

Very nice Saddie happy

Thank you for reading. So much encouragement, here.

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/28/11 07:31 AM
Beautiful you :heart:

Sharris's photo
Mon 02/28/11 05:21 PM

Beautiful you :heart:

a cup of tea, to share with thee
underneath our favorite tree.

no photo
Mon 02/28/11 08:34 PM
drinker (tea) Well saddie I'm glad to see your still a master of words flowerforyou you still make cookies????? lol

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/01/11 11:54 AM

drinker (tea) Well saddie I'm glad to see your still a master of words flowerforyou you still make cookies????? lol

yes, I do. How are you? been ..a long time.

no photo
Tue 03/01/11 01:18 PM
I'm doing great hope you are too.happy flowerforyou Yeah it's been a year or so but feeling like a lifetime

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/01/11 01:53 PM

I'm doing great hope you are too.happy flowerforyou Yeah it's been a year or so but feeling like a lifetime

Glad you are back. Funny you remember my cookies, still go great with tea. Hahaha
Sadie

Una32's photo
Tue 03/01/11 02:37 PM

I draw sparkles in tommorow
And hide behind the smille one sorow
Of being lost and hope and dream
Of you and i, the way we spin
Tru life and words...just hold my hand
Would the clouds from eyes make you understand
How old we become without eachother?
How ugly we look standing next to another
Someoane....walk and breath my steps tru your heart
There's no such thing wearing my existance apart
From your eyes coloured with sun
From the way we writte on our lips " we begun"
I draw sparkles in tommorow...
And i have hoppe in my heart
And dreams in my eyes
And wings i do wear
I draw sparkles...in...tommorow...
And still waitting...hiding sorrow
That we were.


Sorry for my writting english...have tryed my best. A poem written by me, a romanian woman.

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/01/11 03:17 PM


I draw sparkles in tommorow
And hide behind the smille one sorow
Of being lost and hope and dream
Of you and i, the way we spin
Tru life and words...just hold my hand
Would the clouds from eyes make you understand
How old we become without eachother?
How ugly we look standing next to another
Someoane....walk and breath my steps tru your heart
There's no such thing wearing my existance apart
From your eyes coloured with sun
From the way we writte on our lips " we begun"
I draw sparkles in tommorow...
And i have hoppe in my heart
And dreams in my eyes
And wings i do wear
I draw sparkles...in...tommorow...
And still waitting...hiding sorrow
That we were.


Sorry for my writting english...have tryed my best. A poem written by me, a romanian woman.

Una, may I call you, Una?
This is quite beautiful. It speaks of a heart remembering the only way one can in distance.
Sorrow can over whelm when loss has spoken.
This shows you are a beautiful woman, deeply moved by love...
Would you post this in your language so we may hear it in your tongue?
I am Sadie

Una32's photo
Tue 03/01/11 03:30 PM
hy :) i wrotted specialy for the topic...i can try to translate if you want. :)
Thank you so much for your apreciation. I will post more :)

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/01/11 03:39 PM

hy :) i wrotted specialy for the topic...i can try to translate if you want. :)
Thank you so much for your apreciation. I will post more :)

Please post and you can post on your own. Welcome.

Una32's photo
Tue 03/01/11 03:45 PM
AM desenat sclipiri de stele in maine,
Si am ascuns dupa zambet parerea de rau
CA sunt pierduta si sper si visez
LA noi si la cum ne invartim
prin viata, cuvinte....doar tine-ma de mana
Norii din ochii mei te vor face sa intelegi
Cat de batrani suntem unul fara celalat?
Cat de urati suntem cand stam alaturi de alta persoana?
Umbla si respira-mi pasii care vin inspre inima ta
NU imi pot imagina purtand existata-mi fara
Ochii tai colorati de soare.
Departe de cum am scirs pe buzele noastre" am inceput"
Am desenat sclipiri de stele in maine,
Si vise in ochii mei
Si aripile ce le port
Am desenat sclipiri de stele....in maine..
Si inca astept...si port o parere de rau..
Ca am fost.

sadie that the poem in romanian:) it sounds better in english because ..the way i have wrote is for english:)

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/01/11 04:31 PM
Thank you.

Do you have more poetry?
Others here would like to see you post a thread of yours.

Sadie

Una32's photo
Wed 03/02/11 03:10 AM
How strange i found the way you walk
Away from me...
SO dried i found the way we talk
The meaning of the word died
Somewere between your lips and my tumb
Who gives colour on them and feel so numb
By him self.
Were is your hand wich wraps me in the ivory set of down
And fly me to everything wich begun with us?
How strange i found today the way you pick the flowers
IS like they never meet your beatiful hand
LIke your thoughts never walked me...and did not understand..
How strange i found the way i search your breath
Wich lay on my palms like an old written map
Of my soul...
How....strange my live is pouring without you
LIke water in a broken glass...
Not much...like a strow and senseless less...