Topic: worhtless words
joejealousy's photo
Tue 02/08/11 02:58 AM
sometimes, my rhymes don't make any sense
so i take the time, to define my lines, and explain what i meant
as they pertain to my life's current events
my complaints are in vain, and don't make a dent
my writings are insane, but it's a way to vent
my lack of restraint, distracts the fact, that I resent
the people in my life, and their intent
the way they misrepresent, acting as if
their words are a distraction, while their backstabbing persists
I would print a retraction, if their actions would quit
But, their sitting there laughing, acting as if
I'm naive to their betrayal, and not able to resist
a smiling face, with a deceitful twist
without detecting a fake, and the evil's missed
but, I've noticed, their forked tongues and heard the evil hiss
I've tasted the poisoned kiss
from the lips, of a succubus
their so called "love", is truculent
scathingly harsh, with it's destructiveness
the cause and creator of misogynist's
my love was obtained by fraudulence
and I express disdain, for such contempt




hoa0's photo
Tue 02/08/11 05:34 AM
I LIKE YOUR POEM.

no photo
Tue 02/08/11 07:32 AM
Words are Never worthless:wink: drinker flowers

JamieRawxx's photo
Wed 02/09/11 08:58 AM
I really like this one. It is great. flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Wed 02/09/11 09:36 AM
good write