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Topic: The One To Deny
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Thu 07/05/07 08:34 AM
She will come to you with long tipped fingers, red lips
Curved with an insincere smile, cold dead eyes like those of a shark,
That predator from the sea ,unthinking, unfeeling, an emotion
Eating, frenzied killing machine, snapping at life with razor sharp teeth and
She will ooze pus thick charm, in her efforts to woo you, as she
Slyly and insidiously whispers in your ears “listen to me, I speak such truth, I
Possess an oh so common sense, would I lie to you my friend, and how
can you doubt my credibility?”, voiced as she ice pick analyzes and
dissects you from the inside out, mentally taking note of all you are and
all she is not,
You must deny her…

She’s a veritable vacuum; ready to suck you dry in an effort to steal
Your words, your loves, your charms, so unknowing of what it
Takes to make one a human, what it takes to be well and
Truly loved and she will destroy you when she realizes that she,
no matter what she slaughters in her quest, will
never be who and what you are, music, love, joy, filled
child, opened eyed and naïve, singing your words to the stars,
You must deny her!

She will wrap her velvet voiced tongue around you to draw you close in
her efforts to wander your mind, to get to know what makes you tick,
what makes you a wonder, what fuel feeds your emotional engines, she
infiltrates you in the foulest ways imagined in her quest for your Achilles heel,
You must deny her

She will empty your soul as she destroys your loves, your bonds , all
that makes you complete, when she has fed and fulfilled her hunger
for what you have and what she will never possess, her
vacuous stare glazing over when she’s bloated blood lust filled, she
will do all she can to ensure your sorrow, cause your pain, destroy all
dream filled tomorrows, but you, child of light and titanium willed dancer,
Will deny her, in your struggle for survival of the fittest, your fight with righteous
wrath at the invasive and cruelly grasping emotional fingers, as she desperately
attempts to strip your soul and heart, and you will dance another day, when
She is Denied.

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Thu 07/05/07 08:37 AM
MsWizard you have a very beautiful writing style.It captures and mesmerizes the mind,kind of like your beauty.flowerforyou blushing

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Thu 07/05/07 08:39 AM
What a lovely thing to say...thank you...I do appreciate it...:heart:

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Thu 07/05/07 08:41 AM
wizard, writing comes with deep thoughts and wording comes from heart, excellent

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Thu 07/05/07 08:44 AM
So true Frank....I can ONLY write from my heart....thank you!

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Thu 07/05/07 08:47 AM
You are very welcome MsWizard.Only speaking the truth.The visuals that you create through your writing are so beautiful.Everything just seems to flow together and the way you express your thoughts,feelings,and emotions is to be commended.BEAUTIFUL,BEAUTIFUL,...did I say BEAUTIFUL.Thank you for blessing us with your writing.flowerforyou

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Thu 07/05/07 08:52 AM
Very nice, Ms...is this a fictional character? If it's not.....I'm ready...:smile:

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Thu 07/05/07 08:53 AM
MsWizard..

Beautifully written, you do have a way with words...the way you can express yourself. Thank you for sharing this with us...

flowerforyou

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Thu 07/05/07 08:55 AM
Thank YOU~:heart:

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Thu 07/05/07 08:56 AM
Yes doctor it IS a fictional character...LOOSELY based on a woman I know....grin...

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Thu 07/05/07 08:57 AM
Puffins that's a lovely thing to say, thank you~flowerforyou :heart:

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Thu 07/05/07 09:07 AM
REALLY!!!!!!!....tell her you've found a willing victim..:wink:

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Thu 07/05/07 09:10 AM
Trust me Doctor...you dont want to go there....

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Thu 07/05/07 09:15 AM
I have to go somewhere first??????

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Thu 07/05/07 09:24 AM
Going "there" would be a virtual hell.....a one way ticket actually.....

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Thu 07/05/07 09:28 AM
awwwwww c'mon Ms....this gal can't be that bad.

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Thu 07/05/07 09:40 AM
I rarely verbally slaughter anyone who isn't worthy of it Doctor, you should probably take my word for this one.

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Thu 07/05/07 10:07 AM
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Beautiful

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Thu 07/05/07 10:10 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

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Thu 07/05/07 01:51 PM
You do have such a way with words have enjoyed reading them as well.bigsmile flowerforyou

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