Topic: Another Day In Paradise
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Tue 07/03/07 08:40 PM
vipersous venom spewing from lips of,
blonde jetsetted women, and
dark clipped airs of contemptuous,
black souls lacking in love filled with,
deliberate intent, raw and cruel, their
inner hate bites sharp at loving fueled,
words innocently dancing across voice filled pages, are
crucified by angers inside of,
self hated engines that drive the dark force,
as beauty and childlike runs its course, their
hate filled hearts on crude boards abide,
feminine cruelty sharp barbed pins, while a
hateful man filled with poisons inside, his
jabbing razor sharp words digging in, his
slaughter of innocents, mindless and senseless,
no reason behind it again and again,
welcome to the boards

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Tue 07/03/07 10:49 PM
Once again you amaze me with your words,, Your insight into ones soul and Life experiences,,, I am at awe as to what to say,,,
flowerforyou

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Tue 07/03/07 10:54 PM
Thank you Mom.....you're words help to keep me writing....:heart:

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Wed 07/04/07 06:53 AM
Good Morn.MsWizard & a Happy 4th of July sweetheart.I hope U have a bearific day/eve.Wow!freakin amazing gurl.Your words are so true and powerful enough to shake even bedrock.I luv your writing & expression & I could not be any happier that U found JSH,but more so that your fav.place is here in Poetry Forum.U Rawk!gurl.(((((((bear~hugs)))))))ttyl/sweetheart.Godspeed!Cybear;=) :tongue: flowerforyou blushing

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Wed 07/04/07 07:06 AM
Your words that your speak are very powerful indeed.
Words of such pain it touches ones heart straight downn
to the soul. It is sad that anyone would ever have to deal
with that kind of pain. But it is a reality. bigsmile flowerforyou Very good indeed!!

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Wed 07/04/07 08:40 AM
"Good Morn.MsWizard & a Happy 4th of July sweetheart.I hope U have a bearific day/eve.Wow!freakin amazing gurl.Your words are so true and powerful enough to shake even bedrock.I luv your writing & expression & I could not be any happier that U found JSH,but more so that your fav.place is here in Poetry Forum.U Rawk!gurl.(((((((bear~hugs)))))))ttyl/sweetheart.Godspeed!Cybear;=)"

Happy 4th to YOU Cyber! I hope you have a lovely day as well! I will be sweating it out in the heat and sun...aye carumba!

Thank you as always for your kind and encouraging words sweetie!!!MUAH!!! xoxoxoxo :heart:

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Wed 07/04/07 08:41 AM
"Your words that your speak are very powerful indeed.
Words of such pain it touches ones heart straight downn
to the soul. It is sad that anyone would ever have to deal
with that kind of pain. But it is a reality. Very good indeed!!"

Thank YOU! Yes pain in life is a reality, you can either be beat down with it, or suck it up and get something worthwhile out of it...hence...poetry...smile....Have a lovely happy 4th to you!!!:heart: