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eyes closed quiet tears sliding,
tight clenched, wracked in pain, hold on tightly….”don’t leave me”, solitary whispers in the dark, forever’s first respite, knowing with shattering certainty, its the first night, blood rush roar loud in ears, gasping breath,fear panting, echoes loudly resounding,, a knee jerk rush of realization, it’s the first night, its the first night alone, ...without you. |
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vow, it is good wizard
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with out who my friend?????
Another great one.... how was ur day??? did u get my mail today???? Zannie |
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I like it!
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Thank you Frank, Thank you Transient....
Zanne it was written about when Ron was killed..... |
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I thought so sweetheart...just wanted to varify...hmmm...I know u more than I thought...lol
were is my request...?????come on girlfriend...wave that wand and make poetry magic...blow them all away.. how are u tonight??? miles away...ur friend is always with u...xoxoxo |
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Hi sweetie..I got your request...and Im working on it...grin...it doesn't happen immediately....it is coming along honey....xoxoxoxoxoxo
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Awww!So deeply saddening but extremely well written once again.Gravely heartfelt providing the reader with an up close & personal experience of the pain of loss felt.Excellent once again MsWizard.Kudos also given on my latest Poem for U dear,sparked my imagination for that one.I thank You!dearly sweetheart.Godspeed!Cybear((((bear~hug)))
  
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wow--nice reading, mswizard--
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I will be checking your poems cyber...thank you for your lovely words once more...xoxoxox
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Thank you Shadowdog, I appreciate it...smile....
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